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December 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Not bad at all
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December 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Have you read my Ben 10 story? I don't think you're terrible, I think this story is awesome! Now I think it's time for Toph to learn the important role that fluffers play on porn sets.
I just have two suggestions number one don't use the word "ministrations" ever ever again! That word has been used to death it is cliche and does nothing but make the reader grown. Number two you used the word "gangling" the word is actually gangly.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
I just have two suggestions number one don't use the word "ministrations" ever ever again! That word has been used to death it is cliche and does nothing but make the reader grown. Number two you used the word "gangling" the word is actually gangly.
Looking forward to the next chapter!