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December 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, that wasn't so hard, was it?
But seriously, great job with this chapter. Im sorry if my comment for last chapter gave you the wrong idea. I wasn't mad at you or your amazing writing style. I was complaining because I was being an impatient little perv who didn't want to wait for the long awaited zero G orgy. Needless to say, you nailed it. This chapter was amazing, sexy, funny, (btw, I don't know if the last line was a reference to Gravity or not, but it was great all the same ;) )
Anyway, thank you so much for this amazing chapter, and I can't wait for the next one
Jomahawk
But seriously, great job with this chapter. Im sorry if my comment for last chapter gave you the wrong idea. I wasn't mad at you or your amazing writing style. I was complaining because I was being an impatient little perv who didn't want to wait for the long awaited zero G orgy. Needless to say, you nailed it. This chapter was amazing, sexy, funny, (btw, I don't know if the last line was a reference to Gravity or not, but it was great all the same ;) )
Anyway, thank you so much for this amazing chapter, and I can't wait for the next one
Jomahawk
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December 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Best two weeks ever but now somebody's in T.R.O.U.B.L.E truble Phineas better do something quick
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December 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The view was breathe taking but he's smart with building things but when it come to girl's filling he's a smart as a bag of hammers
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December 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
GOD DAMN IT.
Seriously, do you get off on making us wait for the amazing smut that only you are capable of providing? I mean, dont get me wrong, it was a great chapter. Good advances to the plot, good keeping the tension building, and you even got a few laughs out of me, but for crying OUT LOUD, what is with the constant blue balling??
With that said, keep up the great work, and please hurry with the next one.
JMAHWK
Seriously, do you get off on making us wait for the amazing smut that only you are capable of providing? I mean, dont get me wrong, it was a great chapter. Good advances to the plot, good keeping the tension building, and you even got a few laughs out of me, but for crying OUT LOUD, what is with the constant blue balling??
With that said, keep up the great work, and please hurry with the next one.
JMAHWK
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December 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I really like the SPF system. And I really like/hate you for the teases at the end of the chapter. Please update soon.
JMAHWK
JMAHWK
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December 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very good plot development, next chapter looks like a lot of fun, please post soon.
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December 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Somehow, you even manage to make sexless, filler chapters relevant to the story. And I really can't wait to see where you go with phineas and isabella. Update soon!
JMAHWK
JMAHWK
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December 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you brought this storyline back and I'm looking forward to reading more!
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November 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well damn. Isn't that always the way in a space thriller, for absolutely EVERYTHING to go wrong at once. First Isabella and Phineas having their mini-fight, then the space station becoming a floating hunk of metallic Swiss cheese. And on top of it all, the other four couples are now going to not only be freaking out, but horny as their lives are now in very real danger. Im serious, as much as im enjoying this story, if someone dies, it will be a very sad time.
Still, can't wait for your next chapter!
JMAHWK
Still, can't wait for your next chapter!
JMAHWK
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November 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just WOW. Perfect sequel, and definitely staying in character. Phineas, despite coming to the realization of his love for Isabella, is still very very thick when it comes to the romantic needs and wants of his new girlfriend. This chapter gave me several honest laugh out louds, which is becoming more and more rare as of late, and I applaud you for that. But you also took it one step farther and showed that although they are together, Isabella isn't above getting a little mad at Phineas' lack of knowledge when it comes to romance and her desires. On a more serious note, your description for this one did put me off a bit, in that I know you are willing to explore the themes of death from Ferb's back story in Sweet Dreams, but now I'm a little afraid that not all of our sex-tranaughts will be returning to Danville alive. Gravity already showed enough death in space man, I really hope you don't go extending that to the characters of one of my favorite cartoons.
But despite all that, this story is already shaping up to be EPIC. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Jomahawk
But despite all that, this story is already shaping up to be EPIC. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Jomahawk