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June 8, 2023 at 12:00 AM
Quite the sweet sequel
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November 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I know how you feel when some of your work is lost to the world. I still have a painful memory of a recent story that was completely lost thanks that my power source failed me. One hundred and fifteen pages of hard work, lost for ever as the file was damaged beyond recovery.
Well, this actually completes more the first story, and a great deal, but I wonder, doesn't they have a better sense of smell than humans? it's pretty probable that some of them had sniffed the arousal. But then, that would made the story better. Thank you, it was an enjoyable reading.
Well, this actually completes more the first story, and a great deal, but I wonder, doesn't they have a better sense of smell than humans? it's pretty probable that some of them had sniffed the arousal. But then, that would made the story better. Thank you, it was an enjoyable reading.
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November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad there was more. The accidental discoveries were nicely done and the story was a lot of fun. What happens when they get caught?
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November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You lost the middle -- agggh! This was good, but still, I can't help but wish the 2nd still existed.:(