rate_review Reviews

The way you wrote this fic is superb. The gentle start before the erotic parts made this story in my opinion, a masterpiece

Well, at first. I was afraid of entering this story, I did not like the one where Cheetara was raped. In fact I never appreciated or liked the comics implication that she was the sex toy of the mutants once Lion-o went to train inside the book.

It seems that at least there are some people that remember the initial chapter, where they are show naked and without clothes. Meaning that they actually had fur instead of just skin with pretty patterns. So that was well received on my part. It was a good chapter in fact. Pretty real and at least, it develops really a possible relationship between the cubs.

I must admit that I almost closed the window when you mentioned Tygra and Cheetara, I am *not* a fan of that couple. I am aware that they had moments in the initial series, and considering the circumstances, know that's really possible. But I knew too, and remember well that Cheetara initially just seemed to be a older sister to Lion-o when he was just a cub. But once he appeared older and her age, that seemed to change somewhat. And they too had pretty strong scenes that implied that maybe something was happening between them.

Especially when the first Tygra was more nerdy than the new Tygra. I loathed the comics and what they did to ensure the pairing of Tygra/Cheetara. In they end, they did all they could to undermine and destroy the bond that Cheetara and Lion-o had. Ending with a Cheetara that openly hated and disliked Lion-o. I truly hated that. But then that's my taste and not yours, so I will not ask you to not do things like that, it's your right. I just wanted to vent a little.

It would rely suck if you left this story where it is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is a very well written story. I appreciate the focus on the innocence and awkwardness of first-timers. Too often in first time stories the participates are initially hesitant, but then leap into the act like sex-gods. This is a very believable and enjoyable account. I too would like to see a furtherance of this story.

Hey George, thanks for the Thundercats stuff, always liked the show and Cheetara. This seemed well written. expanding the story by having the kats go on some sort of third Earth adventure and continuing their romance or stepping up their game to include the older thundercats (prefferably both) would be good. However if you keep this a one shot it still stands well on it's own. Thanks

Hm, nice. Continue?

this is an awesome fun story I always like these two when I was a kid and I watched this show religiously no I didn't really care for the new one. In the original show the Thundercats obviously didn't have fur on their bodies, personally I would have preferred you stick with that however to each their own.

I can't wait to read the rest of this story, I hope you posted soon.