rate_review Reviews

I really like where this is going. I wish it hadn't died off.

I would REALLY love it if you could somehow work in Ghostfreak and those freaky, smexy tentacles he has! X3

Would love to see Gwen get pregnant by Human Ben

No aliens, one adventure; have you given up?

Great man, I look forward to seeing more! Keep going.

This story is really hot! A couple of grammar errors but nothing too distracting. I'm really looking forward to seeing where it goes!

I'm liking your story, but your grammar is so bad I can tell that english is not likely your first language. If I had to venture a guess I'd say it was probably Russian. The biggest problem with your writing style is the lack of subtlety stop using words like fuck hole and meat stick. There are too many flaws for me to explain to you in a review. Right now my writing program is on the fritz, when I get a new one I will edit your story and send it to you and hopefully that will help you improve your writing and maybe your English.

please don't take this as a flame I mean it sincerely and I hope to help. If you have any questions you can talk to me on the form my username is Aysha c.c.


please keep writing this story I am anxious to see where you take it I do like your imagination.