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So hilarious xD

Hahaha!
Oh god!
Poor Danny...XD

Very enjoyable story, everyone seemed to be in character as far as I could tell.

I'll admit, I'm interested in the other versions. So I'll wait until they're released.

I'm sorry this was taken off fanfiction, especially before I could read it. I think I briefly remember seeing it. Ah well.This is a serious possibility, and there is also a part of me that believes that Maddie would do this to get a DNA sample, for the observation of ghost reproduction or out of frustration in her marriage (with Jack that ghost obsessed, it'd make sense that sometimes he'd be more ghost hunter focused than sex focused). I see the problems people might have, but I honestly enjoyed it. It was a somewhat humorous piece, and I liked the detail and how you handled Danny's treatment. Every writer is entitled to write what they please, and people really need to just get the hell over it. I hope you are able to return to fanfiction, I'd love to read more of your work. Or at least witness more of it here.

I was wondering when I would find this story again. Once again I really didn't see anything wrong with the story back when it was on FFnet since there have been about five stories that have Danny paired up with his mother and yet they get positive reviews while this one was treated like it was the most offensive thing ever written. It's really sad, especially when there are plenty of DannyxVlad stories that have Vlad molesting Danny, yet they're treated like works of art.

I will admit, I would like to see the first two drafts and see the difference from this one.

Please correct your disclaimer.

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Wow love the story a bit dried but asome at the same time hope you post more I have some ideas for a fic but I stink at writing its not.my strong point hope to see more soon

I loved scene with Danny and his mom making love.

Considering that this is posted on AFF I'd suggest putting up the first (and hopefully the extended month one). Mother/son works really aren't my thing but this wasn't bad to read.