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June 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
this was a great chapter, I'm glad that's a Zuko finally expressed his feelings for Azula. I do hope in the next chapter that he would take the time to explain everything that's happened. I'm really hoping is that is this cool story that you're writing doesn't degenerate into a soap opera, because I really hate soap operas!
they are obviously some very interesting plot-bunnies bouncing around in your head. I'm looking forward to finding out what's in the arc, and seeing how the assassination attempt develops. I just hope you don't let this thing with Miso carry on too much longer. I think of Azula should put him in his place.
they are obviously some very interesting plot-bunnies bouncing around in your head. I'm looking forward to finding out what's in the arc, and seeing how the assassination attempt develops. I just hope you don't let this thing with Miso carry on too much longer. I think of Azula should put him in his place.
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April 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yea! a very good chapter!I like that Azula and Zoko's relationship is slowly developing into something more wholesome. This new plot that you've come up with it was very interesting, waiting to see where it leads. Also just curious what's in the arc?
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April 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was both fun and interesting, as I have come to expect. I am looking forward to your next chapter.
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April 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I'm still waiting for your next chapter!
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March 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I bet I know what that tee was. we still don't know what was in the Ark. and I do hope that toph doesn't let Zuko get away with just walking away from that conversation.
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March 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
and now I'm confused!
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March 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was good for building tension. Looking forward to next chapter and see what Zuko does. Will he go after her or if he waits ling enougf will Azula come to him?
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February 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
They are still covering their feelings for each other bye hurting each other: I do hope that they will come to terms with their feelings and end up happy together. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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February 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
you took a lot longer than usual to update I was starting to get worried. I'm still reading and still enjoying this story. except that you get right to wear things are starting to get interesting and then you stop, end of chapter: Its so frustrating!
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February 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
that was really good! A lot of fun! Now you just have to figure out how to get there to admit their feelings for each other. I think it would be awesome if toph were a part of that, if she realizes what's going on between them she might come up with a plan to bring them together. I can't wait to see what you do!