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May 17, 2021 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad I managed to find this gem! This is gonna be in my fanfics to re-read list lol
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July 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omfg I love your fic so damn much im an azuko shipper and I ship them so damn hard and ur fic just makes me fly omfggg my fangirl hart♥♥♥
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October 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was depressing for an ending. Strangely it's not surprising, but i was actually sad for Zuko. And ending it with the fire nation preferring Azula makes it even worst. Though i still can't take away from your writing, but did it really have to be such a miserable ending. It's like hate for Zuko.
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September 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was okay. I mean it was on point but I'm kind of frustrated that Zuko is looking like a love sick sap while Azula is still keeping secrets. I get it and it makes sense from an Azula standpoint, she still has issues. But i would like to think Zuko isn't that gullible, emotional but not gullible. Still great writing and can't wait for the next chapter. And I do like that it's a story and not just pointless sex.
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August 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. It's actually a great romantic one. I just hope it stays this way and not become the childish soap opera stuff. You're writing is really good, this could have easily been a mindless sex story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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August 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was cool! I especially found that last part, (Azula's panic) interesting, what was she afraid of? Is she afraid Zuko's love? Is she afraid of her love for Zuko?
What will she do; When she realizes her love for Zoko is genuine? Will she betray him, and her own heart, just to prove to herself that she can't be controlled by some thing as patty and pathetic as love?
Or will she embrace her love for him and drive him to become the powerful Fire Lord that she believes the Fire Nation deserves? And squash her father's attempt to retake power, will she realize that it was Ozi who poisoned her in the first place? After all, he knows so much about what's going on: he would have known about Zuko's meeting he would have calculated that his brother would never miss an opportunity to enjoy such a rare tea,and recognize the poison for what it was.
He would have suspected at the very least Zuko's affection for Azula, and of course he knew all about the Ark, the pearls and the coven. Right? That Ozi is one tricky clever son of a bitch!
Or maybe I'm just reading too much into things. :D
What will she do; When she realizes her love for Zoko is genuine? Will she betray him, and her own heart, just to prove to herself that she can't be controlled by some thing as patty and pathetic as love?
Or will she embrace her love for him and drive him to become the powerful Fire Lord that she believes the Fire Nation deserves? And squash her father's attempt to retake power, will she realize that it was Ozi who poisoned her in the first place? After all, he knows so much about what's going on: he would have known about Zuko's meeting he would have calculated that his brother would never miss an opportunity to enjoy such a rare tea,and recognize the poison for what it was.
He would have suspected at the very least Zuko's affection for Azula, and of course he knew all about the Ark, the pearls and the coven. Right? That Ozi is one tricky clever son of a bitch!
Or maybe I'm just reading too much into things. :D
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August 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was a lot of fun! Which I think is the best compliment anyone can give a writer; so I'll say it again, I really enjoyed reading that chapter it was a lot of fun!
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July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
another interesting and enjoyable chapter. you really do seem to have an intuitive understanding of these characters and I'm looking forward to what comes next.
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July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER!
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July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Torture never gets you anything but "Fuck you!" information in the real world. The better thing that Zuko could have done would be to create a rappor with the man he was questioning and convince him that Zuko could protect him.
Zuko is also going to have a severe wakeup call when he finds out that his support is slim among a lot of the most important people in the Fire Nation and that him 'being the Fire Lord' will not stop people from trying to take him down, by hook or crook, unless he learns why those people are against him and fixes the issues that make them go against him (or at least listens to their grievances).
Zuko is also going to have a severe wakeup call when he finds out that his support is slim among a lot of the most important people in the Fire Nation and that him 'being the Fire Lord' will not stop people from trying to take him down, by hook or crook, unless he learns why those people are against him and fixes the issues that make them go against him (or at least listens to their grievances).