rate_review Reviews

Entertaining, as always. So I wonder what will be the pace of this story. So far Ferb and Vanessa are quicker to approach the adult front, but as you have described, they are in fact, probably more grown up that Phineas and Isabella. I wonder if this will have more plot than smut? I would love the smut, really, but a great story with plot it's what I like.

This seems like a really intimate place to explore themselves, physically and mentally. So let just see how you do. Especially as this so far it's different than your others stories.

will their be a chapter 2

Interesting, as always. Especially the way you crossed the dreams, I wonder why are they the only ones that are going to be connected to the dreams, and if you are going to explain that, or that will be put aside just for the sake of the story, I don't mind either way. I do wonder if you will make this longer, and more action oriented than erotic. I don't mind the erotism, I like it, but this is a nice set up for a good action story.

Now I understand how your other fans feel. You manage to build such an amazing story, but also go the extra mile and honestly make it feel like I'm actually watching the show. Its obvious you know the material well, & I can't wait for the next chapter.
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