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Story is as sweet as dreamy expensive sugar

That was a great story. Very rarely do I ever find a story like this that is quite erotic, while still being very tastefully done, and that has many thought-provoking themes. For that, Sir, I thank you.

It took me a while to read this, but I finally had some real time to do so. I liked it, a lot. But I have a minor suggestion.

Phineas and Isabella where, sadly, repetitive. Only minors details changed their sex scene from that of your others stories. It felt like I was reading again your past works. I know that you are trying to put an emphasis to the differences between Phineas and Isabella relationship and how they deal with it, and Ferb and Vanessa relationship and how they deal with it.

But that's what you have actually done so in your others stories, you always put Phineas and Isabella in the same car, slow love making with lots of exploring and reassuring. It's kinda repetitive, and to tell you the truth, boring. It doesn't take away the fact that it's a good reading, but sadly, when they finally took another approach to their love making, you cut the scene.

But, there is some difference with Ferb, he and Vanessa seems more real, and in fact a little more fulfilling. It doesn't have that similitude with Ferb others scenes in your stories. It doesn't feel like we are reading the same scene with Gretchen with just a few witty words and new positions, it felts new and different. That's what's save this story.

The ending was good too, and the implications where quite good. It leaves space for a sequel, after all it's obvious that some of the characters might have crushes on the same people. But then, I don't think you would explore further this one. So thanks.

And it has been done. A Ferb x Vanessa that didnt totally bomb and suck. In fact, this was the exact opposite of bombing and sucking. This was soaring and perfection. I cant wait for what you do next

Wow. Just wow. Not only did you end this perfectly, now I really want to see everyone elses dreams as well! I honestly cant wait till your next story, Mr. Glass. I know it will be amazing.
Jomahawk2694

Wow. That was Awesome! BUT FAR TOO SHORT!
Plus, major disappointment on making us wait till next time for Ferb and Vanessa.
But, I can wait. Just please don't make us wait for too long

I loved it all and can't wait to see what happens next

And you have finally done it. You sir, have finally made the pairing that I had all but given up hope on. Let me tell you, until now, I honestly never thought I would find a good Ferb x Vanessa. But now I honestly cant wait, cuz I know you are going to make it perfect. Please update soon!
JMAHWK

Exciting as always. I loved how innocent Phineas and Isabella are being, they are just finding this side of them, and are not completely comfortable with it, but they are not entirely against either. Then we have the contrast with the scene of Ferb and Vanessa, who are older in their minds and really know what is going on. It's a nice contrast of them, but then I wonder did this happen before Vanessa ended up with the son of Monogram? I was disappointed when they paired them up in the show and continued to keep them paired up, yes that could change in the future, especially as Vanessa showed that she isn't entirely good either, so sooner or later they will clash in that regard. IF the creators don't decide to ignore that, of course.

Will you separate them later? Not to couple with the other, but to at least show that not everything will be easy there? And of course, they even finding that even when they are in highly erotic dreams, they do not find the partner desirable, and only long for their lost part. That wouldn't meant that they couldn't share good moments and grow closer in the process. Vanessa finding that she like's Phineas as a friend, even if his optimism can be quite annoying if contagious at times. And Ferb that Isabella could be quite understanding of him, even if they don't share the same chemistry or physical attraction. That would make the encounter a lot more profound and probably steamer, at least for Vanessa at seeing that the brothers doesn't mind being in front of the other while doing something so private.

Another point that caught my attention is their shape shifting ability. That opens another road, as we could see them trying different things and experimenting while still being faithful to the other, as they are still doing it with them, just in another shape. So we could suddenly see all the alternates version of them making an appearance. Chinese Phineas and Isabella, Indiana Phineas and Isabella and so on. That even open up the possibility of them exploring things as magical beast, after all Isabella do seems to have an active mind and the posibility of her dreaming something quite nasty is there. The same with Ferb...

IT would be even funny for Vanessa to dream herself as an evil scientific like her dad, and Ferb coming there to ruin her plans, and herself from other men. And once that ends, she grunts and tell Ferb something like: "Perfect, Now I have this thing on my head and I wouldn't see my father schemes and fights and Perry tha Platypus in the same light ever." You could even explore the posibility of her being goth because the separation of her parents, and how she wished that they could be together even if that wasn't possible any more, just being a silly dream. Not knowing that Heinz and Charlene are having a steamy dream while discovering something about the other in the process? Charlene that Heinz can be quite forceful when he wants, but caring at the same time, while Heinz finding that she isn't entirely all that good either. Yeah. Probably not happening as you said that you will not focus others on the story.

Where will you publish that action story? Here? if that is going to happen, I will be reading. Sorry for the ramblings.

This is quickly shaping up to be just like your other stories, true to the show yet sexy as hell. I cant wait for the next chapter.
JMAHWK