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*has melted into a puddle agaim* um...why don’t you use Carla more???

and all that detail on the beach!!! Holy shit!!!!

*happy noises*

ibts*

I hate to pester you since I know you posted stories recently. But when is the next part coming out? It's been well over a month since you updated and I really hoped that you would have updated by now. Also you are allowed to write a story where Jeremy gets put in a situation where he's put of his comfort zone. Also can Jeremy be in the next part for more than half of it? I knew he's hard to write for but the only way it's going to get easier is to write him into stories more and more. Also I hate that Jeremy has changed with his sex comfort level unlike Emily. I hate being negative but I'm going to pester you until you write a story where gets pushed out of his sex comfort zone and then afterwards is open to new ideas when it comes to sex. Still like your work. Sorry again for sounding negative

Oh, well... I can't actually remember of a nude beach near Rio... But it must be fun. That story gave me ideas, being pretty honest. I think I'll try some of those things with my girl :)

Very nice job. I know I sound like a broken record when I say this but can the next part have Jeremy in a threesome? I understand he's hard to write for but it you make it to where he's more open to other ideas when it comes to sex then it would make your job easier when writing for him in the future. But good job and its worth the wait when you have several sex scenes in one story

Now that was a chapter worth waiting for. My only complaint was that we didnt get to see any of the Carla threesomes. But that would have made this really long and I know thats not your style. Now all I habe left to say is...
Please dont take as long to do part 5!!!
JMAHWK & N-Cole

This was great. I always love your Code Lyoko Fics the most

Nice very hot :)

only just slightly behind part 3 as my favorite ;)

Another great one friend. Only one more to go, you finally put in a lesbian part with Aelita and Emily, and you said you couldn't do it. What are you going to do after the Rio pact? Have you ever considered rewriting some of your old ones? Especially the first time lemons, and I would be happy to help in any way possible, I just want to read them again.

Also, I hope what happened with Yumi and William doesn't go wrong if you know what I mean. I don't think they would be wanting to have each others kids, despite how open their relationship is.

Do you plan on bringing Carla back, or just keep her in Rio? Either way I'm glad you updated again.