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Awesome story. Please update again! Hopefully Anne appears again soon.

I'll admit, I've been waiting on Shego making an appearance since the very beginning. And surprisingly, it's not even the sex I like the most. Ron's slow, steady corruption is simply fascinating. You have added a depth of character to them I find amazing.

Holy crap you're back.I almost gave up man. It's been so quiet on here. Anyways beautifully done chapters as always and im really looking forward to the next updates,hope you will continue to post updates

Way to go I gotta say that was one helluva curve thrown in at the end there, in more ways than one. You did an incredible job on this one too, not to mention that the scene between Ron and Kim brought back some pleasant memories. Also great build and love the way things ended between the two, friggin hilarious. Also really can't wait to see how deep Ron goes down this rabbit hole, and how it'll end up. Can't wait for the next chapter I will definitely be here till the end.

Holy sweet jeebus...I'm so glad I decided to check this fic again on a whim. So glad to see you updated XD Nice chapter too, and I've got to say that Shego's definition of Evil...I like it. Less murderous psychopathy required, more apathy toward legal consequence.

Ron tapped some green booty! :p

Hey nice to see a new chapter! This is another great chapter, I really enjoyed this one. Although I did feel that the first part was long winded especially the first lemon but I can understand why it was so long. I am guessing you were trying to emphasis how important this first time is to Kim and Ron. I loved the Shego part, it was amazing especially with how cute Shego was after Ron went wild literally! I am really looking forward to the Kim and Ann chapter, it is one of the most anticipating pair for me. Considering how Ron might be going down the "Evil Route", I am now wondering if he cares or if he is unconsciously trying to get the girls he sleeps with pregnant (like an alpha trying to breed with as much mates as possible)? It would be extremely interesting if someone like Ann or Shego gets pregnant. Their reactions, Rons reactions, his thoughts on Ann carrying his child despite him dating Kim and if both (Ann and Kim) are pregnant what would he do or think? Thanks for replying to the review and I look forward to the future chapters.

Oh dear mother of a sacrilegious, blasphemous, whore.....that was gucking fantastic. MOOOOOAAAAR.

Very good chapter. Shows that everyone, EVERYONE, has a dark side about them. Acting on it does not necessarily make him or her evil. I love the reason for Shego's turning evil. I'm certain that even Kim could turn if the right circumstances were to occur.

Sorry for not posting a review sooner than now.

Have to say the story is still quite good.

I hope you get back to this story soon.

In terms of what else to suggest, Not sure what else I can say that I haven't mentioned in my first review, especially considering Ron is apparently keeping his anonymity in these situations.

Only other thing I got that could be added would be might be perhaps a "Time Stopper". Basically puts everyone else (or just the subject Ron wants to use it on) on 'Pause' yet Ron can interact with them, ...almost like the Narcoleptor. Weird I know, but hey... got the idea from Japan so ... *shrugs*
There's also perhaps either .... having Ron affected by the Narcoleptor and Kim being the curious one.... that's about all I got.

Again not sure what else can be done to keep the anonymous factor you have going. But there are PLENTY of pretty ladies to work with.

Keep up the good work, peace out!

Amazing writing keep up the amazing work :) when does the next part come out ??