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Chap 5.  Ah, the drama.  You know what you have to do, Ron.  Take charge of them both!

 

Good to see you back, I was thinking it might never happen.  Good luck with the regular updates.

Hey there. I just saw the new chapter and took it as an opportunity to reread the whole story. Still a very enjoyable read. :-)

Mostly I post this to address some of what you said in your author notes though. Specifically that some (many?) people want the sex to be delivered quicker. The vast majority of porn on the net is just like that, quick to the action with at best a little bit of plot or character introduction. Finding a story like yours, one with solid erotic content that is still first and foremost an actual story, is relatively rare and always a joy for me. Especially one that explores the kinkier sides of sexual relationships. 

So thank you very much for the time and effort you are putting into this and please continue to be awesome. :-)

Okay, chapter 1 was great.

seriously - when do we see the first pregnant girl/woman blessed by Ron's "gift"

If the day ever comes that you finish this story, I'll truly be able to die happy! Seriously though thisnisnthe best story I've read in so long! 

Awesome story love how you make things work and dont just write cheap smut. I really like how you make charcters seem real with feelings and doubts, flaws. Iwas shocked when Shego sought out Ron to bed him talk about a out of the blue happening never thought of that.I hope you plan on continuing soon i really like your story you are one of the better authors i have encounterd keep up the good work.

Very good i like it ... more soon ?

This is one of the most interesting stories ive read in a while, I find the storyline compelling and I eagerly await the fifth chapter. I do have to point out something and that is Rons character development, I feel that he is not asserting himself nor living up to his full potential. He has no goal in mind and this stunts his growth as it seems he's simply going along with the flow which can be detrimental as he has no contingencies for possible failures. Id enjoy seeing him gradually take on a more dark and serious role in his impending villain hood. Perhaps you could add drama by making his decision cause conflict with kim and their relationship hiatus from the event could be a possible way for you to expand in the KP world with even a few more villain ladies.
Cant wait for the next installment so pause your life and write damn you WRITE!

Is this story dead? it's been a really long time since the last update...
Please tell me it's not dead

Please update! you need to update this thing. And may i suggest bonnie next time.