Well, I know how Kim is gonna find Ron in Japan...don't think he'll be all that happy finding out Kim put that on him at some point in time.
I really don't like the idea of Kim being cut out of the story. I just hope things change next chapter. I also wonder how Ron will take being away from everyone he loved and lusted for.
Nice to see you're keeping up with you scheduled releases, i just hope we can keep receiving new chapters regurarly even with two more stories coming up.
That being said i'm really looking forward to the next chapter, if i had been Ron i wouldnt mind paying Bonnie a visit, maybe even leaving 'something' in her to remmember me by....
Hey, nice to see this story updated, I've been checking this every few months. I am pleased with the shorter chapters as it makes it alot easier to read. I am extremely excited about a certain someones pregnancy "wink wink" although I am surprised she doesn't really notice this yet since shes a doctor and had two previous pregnancies. I am on guard on the sudden James hate though, hopefully it doesn't become extreme because the show had him accept Ron quite easily. Still hoping for Vivian Porters appearance because she only had a one time appearance on the show and she rarely appears even on fanfics. Hopefully you can do something for her, as she is like Kim very capable but due to her looks and gender, she became disregared and looked down upon by her peers in the scientific community which lead to her defensive actions. In other words she needs serious ronshine. Anyways very happy to see you again and looking forward to more chapters in the future.
Things are getting interesting, altho i believe a certain green villainess might have had a hand in Ron's recent dreams.
I dont mind the shorter chapters as well, as long as they keep coming.
Great chapter. I hope the reason Ann isn't getting enough sleep is she's haveing the same dream Ron just had. As for James he so needs to go live on the Mars colony.
As for Kim, she seems to be like Ron's more dominant attitude. It will be interesting to see how she reacts to Yori again. Even in the show, no one made Kim more jealous than Yori and for the moment I don't think Kim knows she's a ninja and I bet she feels that Ron slept with her at the party.
Love the story. I mean I absolutely love it. Can't hardly wait for the next update.
It's me again. I just realized that you had forgotten about Yori. What did she want to talk to Ron about last chapter and how she will fit into his changing of values. I hope she teaches Ron to accept and balance his dark side as opposed to She go's advice to totally embrace it. I also hope she corrupt Kim a little so she likes yuir love and threesomes.
Great chapter.
Also about the smaller chapter size. I think its a good thing. Because Why your chapters are great there a little much to be read in one sitting and with no way to bookmark a small chapter really help.
I had to do a double-take when I saw this story was updated. Holy Fuck! Merry christmas indeed. I love how your showing him slowly break down under anxiety and doubt. Can't wait to see what he does next!
Oh and the smaller chapters are certainly not a problem, so long as you update this and other stories more frequently ;)