rate_review Reviews

I really like this story, well written for the most part, not grammar errors that I, someone who sucks at grammar, would notice. And most importantly it does feel like an adult version of the show, which most fics on this sight seem to forget to do.

However Candace talking to her common sense is getting a little annoying, and makes Candace seem crazy and not in the way she actually is.

You've got an amazing grasp on these characters! Your other stories were awesome, and this one looks like it'll be just as good. I've said this before, that the thing that seems to trip up aspiring authors the most is dialogue, but yours is just as high quality as the shows. Looking forward to the next chapter :)