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You glorious king, this felt like a special episode of Phineas and Ferb except XXX rated to the max. Splendid beyond measure

Incredibly well-done. You've got an excellent grasp on the characters and setting, tremendous skill with grammar, and a knack for storytelling that combine to make something that could be an episode of the series if the mere thought of it didn't give Disney execs heart attacks. Please keep up the good work!

Well. You did it. You wrote the perfect X rated P&F story. It was honestly like I was watching the show if Disney suddenly became a lemon infested porno set. You sir, are quite possibly the best author on this site. Please keep up the amazing work!
P.S., anf for the love of lemons, please PLEASE do a story about Vanessa and Ferb. That is a couple that has not been explored enough and hasn't been done well a all by anyone. But if there is someone out there who could do it the justice its due, it would be you.
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That was a terrific romp, and so much in-character for the kids to get a random idea from their father (even if very much unintentional) to go through so much work. And the fun they had while doing it was fantastic. Nice use of the clichés and all of the little in-jokes you added. Excellent use of Buford (and his quirk) and Ferb (with his amazing acting skills). Nice touch for Phineas and Isabella to finally get together in such a beautiful and loving way, even if the confession had to happen very quickly before she went all the way. Oh, and using the patch-misunderstanding was very much Isabella – not clearly explaining things or making herself heard. (In the show, for someone so charismatic and determined she's got a bit of a problem expressing herself.)

Too bad you couldn't do full B (Perry) and C (Candace ;)) stories as well, but at least you dealt with them and it was a believable change of character with their fuses popping. For making a light fun story though it was probably better to push that stuff off to the side. (Making suggestions now would likely just be annoying anyway. ;))

Thanks for a great tale of sexy PaF goodness.

I expect great things from you, Mr. Glass; also, much MUCH more of this.

This was a really fun read, you get a 9.5/10 :)

I really like that you got creative with this, instead of having a string of generic sex scenes. Way to go the extra mile. I just can't believe how well you kept everyone in character without ruining the story :)