rate_review Reviews

ok i had to go out of my way to create an account just so I could leave this comment to tell you that you need to finish this damn story. you stopped just before the good part, although to your credit most all of it are good parts. you can't stop right after one of them confesses, haven't you ever read manga. for the sake of all of us, finish what you started, please.

It's a good story, the sex is great, I like Monique, Tara, and Bonnie, and I love Kim and Shego. I just wish there was more, I want to know how the relationships turn out after what happened in this chapter[4].

Maybe Kim could have shego do some bdsm to her at the end of the session kim has the same rolled up eyes mouth open tongue out expression like the first time they had sex

I love the writing style and a well written futanari story is always appreciated. 5-... plus signs?- for you!

This story is fantastic so far, I hope to see a finish on it. This is by far the most intense fanfiction I've ever read.

i like it. update it please!

Love the story so far, I would love to see if Shego gets Kim pregnant.

I really do quite like this story! I've always liked Kim Possible futa stories, well just Kim Possible characters as fute in general if I'm honest, and the idea of an alternate universe where Shego and Kim live in an apartment building together is golden. You have great usage of language and good descriptive sex scenes, keep it up! I can actually picture what you've written in my mind very well and that makes it even better. I'm really looking forward to what you come up with next, if you decided to use all the KP female characters I, for one, would be really happy since I'm a big Bonny fangirl myself. I have not major issues with your work so I don't have need to post anything negative, "top notch smutty awesomeness" would be my dustjacket quote if this was a novel. Have fun with it and please keep this fic going!

-"Jessica"

this story would have been so much better if shego didn't have balls, if you put balls on a woman its not a woman anymore it's a man with tits.

Grest story, would love to see it continued at some point.