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by JonStalle

person John
schedule August 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is great please do keep it up
person Awolfx9
schedule July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please Update. This kind of hardcore Domination story is just too good not to finish. Adventure Time and BDSM especially when it includes Marceline and Bubblegum, goes very well together and to leave such a good story unfinished is a travesty to me. I won't demand you update but I'm pretty much begging you at this point. Either way Good Work.
schedule June 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the read, but stop being a drama-Queen. If you want to write, write. Don't demand reviews, it's just childish. Glad we got back to some futa-sex in chap 4. Looking forward to more.
person Ellen
schedule November 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is an incredibly hot story. Your writing is amazing! I love where it's going.
schedule August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter, I love a Dominant Marceline, especially the futa aspect.
person Funions
schedule June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying it a lot.
person Anonymous
schedule June 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Welp,please update soon, won't you?
schedule June 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM

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schedule June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM

Please correct your disclaimer.


Your disclaimer does not contain one of the two required elements. It must state that no money/profit is made. Stating that it’s just for fun or just for entertainment purposes is not enough.


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schedule June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hmm very nice start, keep at it.