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You're doing God's work my friend. This movie always seems to be neglected when it comes to the rule 34

Favorite part was when Shaggy was trying to psych himself up to go meet the parents... then immediately tries to escape via the window only to find it nailed shut. That had me laughing.

Liked the Hex Girls reference. I appreciate the continuity nods.

Meeting with the parents went better than I expected. Maybe if this story ever evolves to have bigger story lines, you could have Shaggy be forced into another race or maybe some other kind of adventure/field trips with the girls (it helps that he has the Mystery Machine).

Look forward to the next chapter!

Very nice, the lemon scenes are improving greatly.

Ouch, calling Sibella a Twilight vampire? That's just uncalled for, Winnie...

I don't know about Shaggy's old girlfriend from the Monster Race movie, but while reading this I remembered Crystal from the Alien Invaders. She might be a nice addition to this fic since she's an alien and hot and all. Just a suggestion.

Heh, I think when the girls fathers finally show up, whatever their intentions/reactions might be, Shaggy should run like he's never run before, and use every trick he's ever learn to try to escape them.

Keep up the good work!

nice story. i wondered when someone would go for the ghoul school. keep it up!

this is the perfect premise for a chapter the link to the picture is

http://solesartist.deviantart.com/art/Phantasma-and-Sibella-showing-us-their-soles-331140153

also she's offering her shoe

Phantasma and Sibella showing us their soles
by ~Solesartist
Manga & Anime / Traditional Media / Drawings ©2012-2013 ~Solesartist

Sibella : "I know someone who likes our feeeet . . ."

Sibella : "what are you afraid of ? My feet won't bite you. Here's a little present, just try to give it a smell and I dare you not to come directly kiss my little soft soles after that . . ."

Phantasma : "Yeh ! it's been ages since a boy gav our feeties some loving care !"

Phantasma : "Take a look at my soles. All wrinkled ! I woul die (again) to get them rubbed, kissed and massaged !"

Nice chapter.

I noticed the detail and length have both improved. Good work.

Wonder what it was Shaggy had Fred send?

Keep up the good work! I look forward to more!

Great story so far. Are you planning on adding in Princess Fairy Willow and the Cat Witch from the Scooby-Doo and the Goblin King. And I would love to see what happens when the ghoul's parent's and the rest of mystery inc. find out about what Shaggy has been up to.

Quite a nice story I have to admit. I have been thinking about doing something with Ghoul School for a while, that movie marked me when I was a kid... and what better to do than make something naughty out of it x3? Still I am busy with something else at the moment, but would like to give it a chance latter on. However, back on topic. The story is nice and I wouldn't mind seeing more of it, no matter what you chose to do, though I have to complain a bit on the lack of detail, though that may be because I have been writing for fifteen damn years and am obsessed with giving loads of detail everywhere as well as creating nice (sometimes convoluted) stories. In any way I'd like to see more of this, though take your time if you need to, one chapter a day is nice but I just end up wanting more since they are small XD

If it's not too much, could u explain what happend to the Calloway cadets and preferably a sex scene with them, Plz!!!!! (P.S Give them more manly qualities, like size of you know what or muscle size)

Ha ha, Ghoul School. Haven't seen that movie in years, but I remember it quite fondly.

I like how you also added the continuity of the Werewolf/Monster Race movie. Nice touch.

The story is great and I've liked every chapter so far. I do wish they were a little longer and with some more detail (particularly the lemons) but I believe that will improve as your writing continues.

I think for now just more chapters with Shaggy and the girls will be fine, some with 1-1 action and some with more.

Let's see, a new student? I think the movie showed some new students at the end, but I honestly can't remember what they were. What option's do we have? A zombie girl, a lizard girl, a witch, a succubus, something oriental like a kyuubi (fox girl) or a yukki-onna (snow woman), a dryad, mmmm... that's all I can think of.

Just a suggestion, but how about you make the new student twins? I think that would be cool.

Great work. Keep it up!