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June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. you should update more often lol. But I really do love this story
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May 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice filler I believe that should hold me until the next full installment. Can't wait to see if Boni and Marci get to take out their angry sexual frustration out on Finn.
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May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
There's not many harem story's involving Finn on sites like these, and I'd really like it if you did just that.
Anyways, 1000 internets to you or making this IC so far!
Anyways, 1000 internets to you or making this IC so far!
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May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You dirty tease! A beautiful woman and two nymphs playing with themselves and you end it!? Nice. Also I forgot that Bonni and Marci are sorta friends nice spin there. I am curious about the Flame Princess thing but I'm guessing Finn may not make it to flame kingdom. Or he might guess its just wait and see.
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May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's official (at least according to me), this is the best Adventure Time Lemon ever! I can't wait for the moment when Finn have a threesome with both PB and Marceline. Although are you going to make this a harem story as well? Because I certainly hope you do.
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May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dude. This the hottest scene ever. Asides from a few grammatical errors you should totally continue this fic since it is the best Adventure Time lemon, if not the only good one, on this site.
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May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story love it, love the Finn Mar Mar pairing. Can't wait for the next chapter to seer what else you got planned. I hope Finn stays loyal to Marceline when Bubblegum comes calling. Also nice use of the Bonnie line from "So The Drama".
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May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You need to format chapter 2, so it actually fits on the screen and doesn't require side scrolling.
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May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is AWESOME plz continue this