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A great way to start a vacation. Yes, I can attest to it ;-3

ibts

Another mini-series, eh? I'm expectant to see how this one turns out.
The only issue I have with this one is the same that I had with most of your CL stories: Sam is WAY overused in favor of neglecting other characters. I hope the next part focuses on the remaining four.

As always, keep up the good work.

Can you upload your other code lyoko stories from fanfiction please

Awesome start to what im sure will be an awesome series m8! My only request is that lita and Emily get some lovin in the near future. (And that william will get to collect on his "punishment" at some point) cant wait for more!!
Your fan and friend,
JMAHWK

already can't wait for the rest ;)

OK, this caught me a little off-guard, I admit, but let's get it started... First of all, I confess I got a bit dizzled at first, like, "how the hell it's still snowing in the middle of May?", and, as well, it would be more prudent - and plausible - to set it in November or like, but it doesn't matter that much. Another thing was Ulrich saying nudity there was legal, but then you showed it was only his point of view. Also, Odd being more reasonable than Ulrich was a little OOC, but that was funny as well. And I liked the fact that you took into count the travel lenght, the fact that they would to leave the airport late at night to arrive early, and all those things we already know - including that of the "smaller version of the carnival", that made the whole sense of the fic. Keep up with the good work!

Nice way to start it off, can't wait to read more !

A multi-chaptered Code Lyoko story?.... I tihnk I died and went to heaven!!!!!!!!!!!!!