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by CrossroadAvarice

schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it :{
person Lovestarwars
schedule March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fives! Just love seeing Fives in these types of roles. They seem to lend themselves so well to his character. He plays the sauve adventurer so well. Love the friction between these two and would love to see more! This is great!
person Jade_Max
schedule March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I admit it; I grinned at the tropes to be found here.

The rumpled tuxedo; the massage that hints at something more; the use of sex as a release of tension; the sweeping of the table to clear it and even the swift, furious claiming.

Fives is so well suited to being this Bond-esq character; he's got the right temperament and his way with A shows he not only knows how to read the signals she's sending him, but not waste time in acting on them. Fast, intense, the coming together of equals ready for a little play and, at the same time, finding solace in one another.

I particularly like the ending with "A" telling Fives that there's no rush for food... I get the feeling he's the one on the menu now :D