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If you do continue this do me a favor and don't add Sam this time around. While I loved the original and can see the difference between the two the moment Sam got a place was the moment it was ruined in my eyes.

A very very good story so far. Unlike most erotica it actually has a plot which is nice and refreshing. Please write the next chapter soon

Are you alive?! I want to know what happens

Really hate to bug you, especially when this isn't even a review, but I don't think I can bring myself to wait any longer for the next instalment of this series. I positively NEED to read more of this masterpiece. If you could even update with a note saying that you've decided to abandon the project it would put my mind (among other things)at ease.

Please keep writing.

Yours, Locksley

Your previous Danny Phantom story was already pretty high on my list, but this? This outdoes it in every way! I can only hope it never ends.

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Well I have to admit it you have definitely improved the first chapter of this story and it makes me, intriqued about the next chapter espescially with the parent teacher meeting. I'm hoping Valerie and Jazz get to have some fun in your story, but still thank you for your hard work and keep up the great writing!!!