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Awesome. I hope the ending was a sort of sneak peek to a future story. Please make more

So, this has to be newest favorite story here on this site. I wonder what is going to happen next. If you ever need or want this story adopted let us know. I'll take it up.

Wow from that ending I'm wondering if there's gonna be more to the story or another arc. Maybe Dan vs. women scorned, or Dan vs. hot sweaty sex? I'm just spit balling here. But either way can't wait to see what you got planned

Awesome chapter reminds me of why I love the show so much. Nice touch with Elise and the demoness though it would have been nice to see the scene between those two. I mean there has to be a pretty 'big' reason she stays with Chris and deals with all of Dan's crap. He must have some skill. Also hilarious ending seems like something Dan would do, but can't wait till the next chapter to see it all plays out.

Nice story so far, I greatly enoy this story and hope it continues. I see bsdm in dan's future. Seeing as she's a demon.

Hey glad to see ya back at and with such an awesome story too! I haven't seen Dan vs. in a while but I love the show and you sit have hit the nail on the head with this one. Take out the few curse words you have in here and this could be an actual episode. Really can't wait to see how this one plays out.