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Great cliffhanger,maybe they drug kim that makes her open to suggestive ideas like on her knees or squat down and give both jim and tim blowjobs at the same time while the camera on the tripod recorded it

Well that was some out of character, fucked up, shit. Most interesting fic.

hope you update soon with actual lemon scenes

Eh could have been better I know descriptive writing and dirty talk is hard to pull off, but that was a scene that should have been kept in. Also I know it's not much seeing as how she is still under her brothers thumbs, but she should have sex with Ron at least take away the pleasure of them being her first. Unless that's the end in that case very hentai-esque ending.