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May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's about time you took my advice and rolled out a proper sequel! It's true that most of my attention has been focused on Belfry's story for the past few months, but don't think for a second that I've ignored your own; far from it. I'm looking forward to the inevitable gangbang between Johnny, Mary, and their future selves. Heaven knows you've been hyping it up enough up to this point!
As I said last year, I'll keep reading if you keep writing.
As I said last year, I'll keep reading if you keep writing.
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March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love where this is going place let it keep going this way and update soon
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January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Another fine chapter, showing how true love can overcome any obstacle. Keep up your great work!
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January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey this fic shows great possabilities keep them coming love to see what happends next
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January 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like incest doesn't run in this family...IT GALLOPS!
Another great chapter!
Another great chapter!
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January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Rather good so far, looking forward to reading more.
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January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Did somebody peek at my plot outline?
JUST KIDDING!!!
I'm very happy that you are writing an official follow-up to your story. I've read the first four chapters you posted, and I must say that you have shown that a woman in love is not to be taken lightly. Susan should have known better; after realizing what Mary did to her mind, did she really expect Mary NOT to try anything when she felt threatened a second time?
It is nice to see Susan as the sane one, and Mary going psyco to keep Johnny. Maybe Johnny can convince her that her solution is worse than the problem. They haven't had sex yet, so they can still keep from CROSSing that LINE (pun intended). I don't know if the rest will be romantic or sexual or both, but it is clear that Johnny loves Mary as much as Mary loves Johnny.
Looking forward to the next chapters! ROCK AND ROLL!
JUST KIDDING!!!
I'm very happy that you are writing an official follow-up to your story. I've read the first four chapters you posted, and I must say that you have shown that a woman in love is not to be taken lightly. Susan should have known better; after realizing what Mary did to her mind, did she really expect Mary NOT to try anything when she felt threatened a second time?
It is nice to see Susan as the sane one, and Mary going psyco to keep Johnny. Maybe Johnny can convince her that her solution is worse than the problem. They haven't had sex yet, so they can still keep from CROSSing that LINE (pun intended). I don't know if the rest will be romantic or sexual or both, but it is clear that Johnny loves Mary as much as Mary loves Johnny.
Looking forward to the next chapters! ROCK AND ROLL!