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February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like the Idea behind the story. There aren't enough Joseph/ Bobby fics. However their was no emotion in it. You could try describing a nervous tone in Joseph's vocie when he is talking about the adults seeing him buy condoms. During the sex scenes describe the pleasures of what each boy is feeling in detail.
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December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
would love to see you continue this with Hank finding out that it is bobby and that it shocks him so much his head explodes and he dies...i dislike hank on occasion and it would be funny to read :D