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March 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Having just finished chapter 3, I'm fond of another chapter between AJ and Mac.
I'm also ok with the lack of sex thus far as the soft tension is enough to keep me reading.
I'm also ok with the lack of sex thus far as the soft tension is enough to keep me reading.
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March 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Incest is always quite an amusing shot and playing on the closer characters from the show is always a good move. What makes me a might curious is, what form do you have them in? Hands have come up at least once so far, so I'm wondering if maybe you're writing them as human. Because ponies don't have hands.
Looking forward to more chapters, and thanks for writing it, even if this fetish isn't your thing.
Looking forward to more chapters, and thanks for writing it, even if this fetish isn't your thing.
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March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was thinking that like rainbow dash so applejack with Apple Bloom and Rarity with Sweetie Belle would make the best pars to me please make it it like this please
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March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well here is a surprise! I find this gem on my trolling of the Internet, I'm incredibly lucky! This is touching in a way, the first chapter was the most touching after the review I'm going to read it again, and maybe just one more time. If you want my vote Spike should get them all!! Nah that's cliched, here's how it goes down, Spike gets Rarity, Twilight, and Applejack. Pinkie will probably get the twins. Obviously Rainbow dash has scoots, as for Fluttershy I'm stumped, really I wanted Spike but I think three is enough.
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March 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this thinking it would be complete crack and only worth a laugh or two... After reading it I'm almost ashamed to say that I really enjoyed it lol. It was on the sweet side and more of an intimate thing then a fetish thing reading it. So I have to say, nice job.
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February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I kind of liked it i can't wait to see who is next please be soon
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February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Can Big McIntosh be the one that milks Fluttershy that would be so awesome beyond awesome and for Pinkie Pie how about Joe from MMMystery on the Friendship Express that would be so awesome beyond awesome I'd love that
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February 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a lot more enjoyable then I thought it would be.
A little work on corrective grammar and spelling and a little more notification of a scene change will go a long way.
A little work on corrective grammar and spelling and a little more notification of a scene change will go a long way.
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January 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's nice, write some more. Maybe get so that they like it so much they have sex or something, I dunno.
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December 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i hae a couple suggestions. my email is verifiaman@yahoo.com