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March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Why she have to find out I liked where the story was going then it like you slapped me in the face please don't mass it up by a fight between the two please
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December 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far kind of reminds me of Aki Sora (a very awesome manga). This is still cool can't wait to see what happens next.
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December 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey vic. I gotta say, nice story you got going here so far. Is there a sequel or is there more to come for this story? It's a very good angle, Johnny and Mary. Even better that you introduced the dream machine, and Mary's symbol is the moon, which could be received as her domain being the night time.
Hope you continue writing this, since you're doing a damn good job. Looking forward to seeing what you're going to have Susan do. Good luck vic_elor.
Hope you continue writing this, since you're doing a damn good job. Looking forward to seeing what you're going to have Susan do. Good luck vic_elor.