rate_review Reviews

I really like this story,the part with the lake spirit is interesting, and a little creepy. Keep up the good work,and I hope you'll choose to continue.

This was a very powerful story, I enjoyed what you have so far. I hope that you will not end it here,and look forward to reading more.

I really like this! It's been a long while since I read a Zukaang story, a good one that is. I don't know why nobody hasn't picked up on this story yet, but it has potential to be really great! I would glady check up on this section for updates on this story of yours. One question though, why isn't Zuko being targeted by this entity as well? He is the one that's keeping Aang from telling the others about them, it would make sense for the spirit to go after him as well. But if you have a reason for why the spirit isn't going after Zuko and focusing soley on Aang instead then I guess it would be alright. An explanation on the why the spirit isn't etc. would be nice, unless it'll be explained later on in the story. :D