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October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, sorry, forgot to leave a suggestion.
I think you've captured the personalities of the entire cast perfectly. I suggest that Jack and Arcee can have some rough times but are never unfaithful to each other.
An amusing idea WOULD be to punish Arachnid would be to have her in absurd restraints and forced to birth more bots as payment for killing Cliffjumper and Tailgate. This is, of course, after Jack and Arcee's baby is born and a small recap on how humans, like the bots, were born of Unicron (which is true to the prime canon as Earth was formed around the spark of unicron whereas cybertron was sorta built on his body... complicated).
I think you've captured the personalities of the entire cast perfectly. I suggest that Jack and Arcee can have some rough times but are never unfaithful to each other.
An amusing idea WOULD be to punish Arachnid would be to have her in absurd restraints and forced to birth more bots as payment for killing Cliffjumper and Tailgate. This is, of course, after Jack and Arcee's baby is born and a small recap on how humans, like the bots, were born of Unicron (which is true to the prime canon as Earth was formed around the spark of unicron whereas cybertron was sorta built on his body... complicated).
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October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is simply AMAZING! I have been waiting for a sweet romantic extension between Jack and Arcee and this was everything and more. PLEASE continue this!
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October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love where this story is going. I would have never thought Arcee would turn into such a nympho and Jacks sudden realizations are simply classic. kinda wish there was a bit more June dialogue and interactions. but other than that great story keep up please
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October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed the story very much
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October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Personally i have read my fair share of these stories. But this one was hands down the best. The way you made it work was amazing. As for were you could take this story the show transformers animated had a human cybertronian hybrid. Arcee's child could be the same. With megatron finding out and becoming obsessed with finding out how another cybertronian was born. Also a little three way with Arachnid wouldn't hurt.
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October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
cool cant wait for more keep up the good work