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Hello I don't know if your reading this ,but please finish it.People are still reading even today.So please I ask you no I order you to finish it.Also, I made this account to send.Have a nice day.

please! oh god please finish this story!

Please make more I'd like to see arcee and jack give their child siblings

I loved this please tell me there's more banging of arcee and meeting the human Cybertron man hybrid

I loved this please tell me there's more banging of arcee and meeting the human Cybertron man hybrid, a little 3way jack arcee jacks mom😈

Update your story its too cool to leave hanging

This story has been one of the better fanfixs I've read. It's great to see them written by such talented ametuer authors( no insult intended). The story started out as if it could have been a jack/arcee sex oneshot but you added so much more with your story. You had a lot of great sex scenes, don't get me wrong but how you integrated the drama flowed nicely, it wasn't forced. I was also taken back when part of I think chapter 3 or 4 was a bunch of sci-fi tech talk ice never actually read in a fanfic before, that was integrated nicely rather than leaving us with an explanation like " just accept it and move on". You also made barely any grammatical mistakes too. I tend to give some leeway when it comes to that cause sometimes it seems common place, but I've read some like every word was an abbreviated slang of the word and that's annoying. I really enjoyed how you've been telling the story and I agree with some of the other comments that the baby should be a hybrid like the one from transformers animated at least similar scientifically speaking. You have a great talent in writing and it be a shame if you stopped at chapter 4 . it has been a couple years since you lasted updated it but I did see it's been a few months since you last edited it so I know you haven't forgotten about this story. I know sometimes it's hard when life can get in the way if hobbies like this but a release of chapter5 soon would be most appreciative for every. But you do have a good skill with erittingvand it's always nice to see that in fanfics. I hope you at least consider a career in writtingbcause u have a talent. But I am rambling now...so...just keep up the good work andbi hope to see ch5 soon.

wowww these stories are really good, well done on creating them dude, keep spicing up the sex because your doing well at introducing new stuff and not making it boring. if bulkhead and arcee had sex that would be pretty weird personally, not something i would enjoy reading. however jack and june is great nice one on that! when is chapter 5 coming out??

Good stuff !

Insane storyline is all i can say to that 5* from me