rate_review Reviews

I say that this story needs to be rewritten so that the freaky thin loopy typing thing is replaced with times new roman, like what everybody else types in. The first two chapters are great, but after that, it just hurt my eyes.

i like the story but there's so many repeated things like the friends joke and the oh my god thing i wanted to skip anything around it. And it was annoying; i want to read more but i want it to focus on the story at hand. not the jokes around them if it were just story id love it so far but the joking made it undesirable for me to read

Wow that pretty much scar timmy for a wile and now wanda is having some natty thoughts about timmy I wonder if his mom will trie and.help him with this problem keep it up

Wow cosmo and timmys mom what else can happend hope to see more soon

Wow short going to need more hope you post soon

Well this chapter gives more to it I hope its going in that direction keep them coming