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December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Morality chain*-small correction
Part 2 of my review since I had to end the previous one prematurely due to being pressed for time.
More cracks start to show in Azula and I laughed at while she got a girly dress, Katara got armor and Zuko one upped her magnificently. Ozai is quite the oddball lol. Although the more they piss her off the worse she is going to get before she finally goes nuclear on someone.
Part 2 of my review since I had to end the previous one prematurely due to being pressed for time.
More cracks start to show in Azula and I laughed at while she got a girly dress, Katara got armor and Zuko one upped her magnificently. Ozai is quite the oddball lol. Although the more they piss her off the worse she is going to get before she finally goes nuclear on someone.
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December 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I've spent the last 3 days reading this wonderful story and just caught up to your writing. I love love love the universe you have made. I'm still iffy about how I want this to end. In another fandom we discussed how our fav male character could ever redeem themselves after raping either our fav female character or any female for that matter. Rape is such an ugly thing for women and I think we'd like to read about how a rapist is redeemed and becomes good because it happens so rarely in real life. Another fan commented that the only way for the rapist to redeem themselves is to be killed, but I don't think I could handle reading about Zuko's death. I'm so torn and that's all your fault... I mean talent ;-)
You've made us feel so much for these 2 characters and their plight. I mean, you held our interest for hundreds of chapters!!!! You have such an amazing talent and I can't wait to see more from you! Thank you for sharing this amazing version with us.
You've made us feel so much for these 2 characters and their plight. I mean, you held our interest for hundreds of chapters!!!! You have such an amazing talent and I can't wait to see more from you! Thank you for sharing this amazing version with us.
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December 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ah, casual threats of murder over a nice meal............reminds me of thanksgiving at my apartment. And yes, Azula's mental state is showing. Love the quick updates by the way. Nice to see Katara showing that she still has claws, even if they have been dulled a bit. Poor Jin, that girl is being pulled through the ringer with these psychos and having her mind frequently jacked with cannot be healthy.
And thanks for the confirmation on Azula's preferences, I have a weakness for femslash and was just curious.
And thanks for the confirmation on Azula's preferences, I have a weakness for femslash and was just curious.
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December 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hmm for once I don't have a threat or a rant.........although it killed me when that scene with the new prisoners being ushered in came up. Women and children.............-twitch-........ they just keep racking up that bad karma.
And this particular line caught my eye:
"They were in the hotel lobby when they saw Azula. Her clothes were slightly disheveled, her skin was slightly pinkened and she was sweating."
It was mentioned briefly in a past chapter that Azula enjoyed the company of women correct? If so did she just come from a "session" and was it consensual? Or does she just have blood poisoning but to a worse degree than Zuko?
Sucks that Katara is still getting shade from the Earth kingdom citizens although from there perspective it is easy to be pissed at her and lay a lot of what has happened to them at her feet.
And this particular line caught my eye:
"They were in the hotel lobby when they saw Azula. Her clothes were slightly disheveled, her skin was slightly pinkened and she was sweating."
It was mentioned briefly in a past chapter that Azula enjoyed the company of women correct? If so did she just come from a "session" and was it consensual? Or does she just have blood poisoning but to a worse degree than Zuko?
Sucks that Katara is still getting shade from the Earth kingdom citizens although from there perspective it is easy to be pissed at her and lay a lot of what has happened to them at her feet.
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December 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
SOOO MANY UPDATES!!!! Thank you, Thank you so very much!!!!
I gland you didn't thought i was nagging too much with my questions/requests on the story, cus I really love how you making the avatar world complete on it. Do you investigate about different cultures to make it so or it's all from your imagination?. Gawshhh you almost kill me with all the floff on the last chapters, no cus I hate, but beacuse It so different from all they are living in the moment, I was very close to TT-TT at the end of it. I know the water tribe warriors the capture are northerners because there was no mention of females on their group, not that I'm ok with rape,but they totally deserve get their ass fuck out of them with the way the treat their women. now the nagging .. I mean questions, it's Bong-Cha one of the twins that Kokoro birthed? When will we know more about Iroh and Toph's quest for "Space Sword"? Will Ty Lee help out the Team Avatar when they try to escape or will she standby Azula (kinda like what may did in the show for Zuko? Will The Zhao twins and Mu follow Zuko if he goes with katara and the others when they escape?will sing se switch sides now that she see frist hand what kind of psycho Azula is (by the way love ur Azula, she is one of my favorites!!!)?I have more questions but For now i think that's enough. Keep the Good work, Hope you have fantastic holidays, and you spend your time full of joy!!!
I gland you didn't thought i was nagging too much with my questions/requests on the story, cus I really love how you making the avatar world complete on it. Do you investigate about different cultures to make it so or it's all from your imagination?. Gawshhh you almost kill me with all the floff on the last chapters, no cus I hate, but beacuse It so different from all they are living in the moment, I was very close to TT-TT at the end of it. I know the water tribe warriors the capture are northerners because there was no mention of females on their group, not that I'm ok with rape,but they totally deserve get their ass fuck out of them with the way the treat their women. now the nagging .. I mean questions, it's Bong-Cha one of the twins that Kokoro birthed? When will we know more about Iroh and Toph's quest for "Space Sword"? Will Ty Lee help out the Team Avatar when they try to escape or will she standby Azula (kinda like what may did in the show for Zuko? Will The Zhao twins and Mu follow Zuko if he goes with katara and the others when they escape?will sing se switch sides now that she see frist hand what kind of psycho Azula is (by the way love ur Azula, she is one of my favorites!!!)?I have more questions but For now i think that's enough. Keep the Good work, Hope you have fantastic holidays, and you spend your time full of joy!!!
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December 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg is that the end?? I need more! Ahhhh!! If this is the last chapter please write an epilogue!! Arghh
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November 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
-reads through chapters 204-214-
-SLOWLY puts gelding knife away.....at least for Zuko-
The "what could have been" dicussion was sweet and sad at the same time. They both know such a life is not possible and that at least from Katara's side, their is no love...at least yet.
Chu-Hua continues to be a morally bankrupt creepy twat along with the rest of the ash makers(that is a canon insult). Granted this story has gone in a totally different direction than canon but at some point will Katara ever gain the knowledge of blood bending? Would be quite useful in an escape attempt and a little bit of vengeance.
-SLOWLY puts gelding knife away.....at least for Zuko-
The "what could have been" dicussion was sweet and sad at the same time. They both know such a life is not possible and that at least from Katara's side, their is no love...at least yet.
Chu-Hua continues to be a morally bankrupt creepy twat along with the rest of the ash makers(that is a canon insult). Granted this story has gone in a totally different direction than canon but at some point will Katara ever gain the knowledge of blood bending? Would be quite useful in an escape attempt and a little bit of vengeance.
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November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
-checks blood pressure-
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.....okay....now before I began my ran...ahem "review" I would like to get this out of the way first.....
“My people aren’t bad Katara, they just view things differently than yours do.
Well, if THAT isn't the fucking understatement of the year!!!
Read through all 4 updates and had to pause and take a break several times to compose myself. That Major in chapter 200 was a real piece of work. After a good ol rape still considers himself a good man while joking about the rape of the other prisoners and that goes to show you how fucked up these people are. And then hey look there, they are making a mini sanctuary to help the women.....they..just.........raped......yeah. It is the sheer lack of empathy and guilt that pisses me off so much. They rape the women and think it's okay and think that building a little comfort hovel to help ease the women's aches makes them square.
And man Katara is getting the short end of the stick in all of this. Forced to keep her mouth shut from revealing the truth and gets more shade from the victims than the fire nation are getting. Katara even pointed it out, the female fire nation personnel did jack shit while fellow women were being abused along with some boys and yet it's her that gets flak? I would love to see either her or a victim of the mass rape just rail against the fire nation individuals, whether they are female or male and call them out on their savagery and lack of standards. It may not end well for the poor women but it would be nice for someone to see that Katara is in a similar predicament and give the fire nation some shit. Especially would love to see a raped women explode at one of the female fire nation personnel for their lack of action.
Now don't let my rage lead you too assume I dislike this story......that couldn't be further from the truth, I adore it. It is just a LARGE percent of a "certain" fire based group that I hate with a passion. I'm still up in the air about Zuko, but at least he is trying and has no taste for rape........except the whole thing with Katara which was tech...nically......necessa..............god DAMN IT NO LONGER UP IN THE AIR.......I will settle for castration with him. Everyone else.....they can burn. You have some serious talent if you can make me react this way damn it lol.
Nice too see Aang still has some moves but damn is he in the dark on what is going on outside his little prison.
-waits patiently for next chapter-
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.....okay....now before I began my ran...ahem "review" I would like to get this out of the way first.....
“My people aren’t bad Katara, they just view things differently than yours do.
Well, if THAT isn't the fucking understatement of the year!!!
Read through all 4 updates and had to pause and take a break several times to compose myself. That Major in chapter 200 was a real piece of work. After a good ol rape still considers himself a good man while joking about the rape of the other prisoners and that goes to show you how fucked up these people are. And then hey look there, they are making a mini sanctuary to help the women.....they..just.........raped......yeah. It is the sheer lack of empathy and guilt that pisses me off so much. They rape the women and think it's okay and think that building a little comfort hovel to help ease the women's aches makes them square.
And man Katara is getting the short end of the stick in all of this. Forced to keep her mouth shut from revealing the truth and gets more shade from the victims than the fire nation are getting. Katara even pointed it out, the female fire nation personnel did jack shit while fellow women were being abused along with some boys and yet it's her that gets flak? I would love to see either her or a victim of the mass rape just rail against the fire nation individuals, whether they are female or male and call them out on their savagery and lack of standards. It may not end well for the poor women but it would be nice for someone to see that Katara is in a similar predicament and give the fire nation some shit. Especially would love to see a raped women explode at one of the female fire nation personnel for their lack of action.
Now don't let my rage lead you too assume I dislike this story......that couldn't be further from the truth, I adore it. It is just a LARGE percent of a "certain" fire based group that I hate with a passion. I'm still up in the air about Zuko, but at least he is trying and has no taste for rape........except the whole thing with Katara which was tech...nically......necessa..............god DAMN IT NO LONGER UP IN THE AIR.......I will settle for castration with him. Everyone else.....they can burn. You have some serious talent if you can make me react this way damn it lol.
Nice too see Aang still has some moves but damn is he in the dark on what is going on outside his little prison.
-waits patiently for next chapter-
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November 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's be very long since I last login and I was glad to found new chapters (and of course you'r fic it's still epic as always).
So Have a few thing to say, first LOL I din't expected Zhao 1 to be gay, you got me there girl!!. second, It's kind o makes me a evil person, but I really want to twist Jin's neck, a lot of the problen that happening (or about to happen) are thanks to her, seriously were did she left her brain. I think if Song was the one that Zuko found a declare his first, she would have reacted way better, I mean she look like a smart girl.At last, I would really appreciate if you write more about Taruk, you don't have to, but I think It will be awesome if you do. Thanks again for been a fantastic fic writer.
So Have a few thing to say, first LOL I din't expected Zhao 1 to be gay, you got me there girl!!. second, It's kind o makes me a evil person, but I really want to twist Jin's neck, a lot of the problen that happening (or about to happen) are thanks to her, seriously were did she left her brain. I think if Song was the one that Zuko found a declare his first, she would have reacted way better, I mean she look like a smart girl.At last, I would really appreciate if you write more about Taruk, you don't have to, but I think It will be awesome if you do. Thanks again for been a fantastic fic writer.
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October 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
chapter 198
MAN things have gotten dark. With every chapter my hatred for the fire nation in this story increases along with my frustration of Katara. She is a resourceful girl and yet had yet to figure out a way out of her current predicament. It must be painful as hell for her, that the very same soldiers she was giving aid too, just raped innocent people. It's seems like at times she is acquiring a case of Stockholm Syndrome and is making excuses for Zuko's treatment of her and being far to friendly with her fire nation captors just because some of them show her the smallest of kindness. Even the twins aren't good people.
I just want something, ANYTHING bad to start happening to the Soldiers at this point.........and I may have missed something in the previous chapters but if Katara got to Aang and told him what has happened not only to her but many other innocent people......that would be more than enough too puh hm into the avatar State and fuck some people up.
-now on to the next chapter for me-
MAN things have gotten dark. With every chapter my hatred for the fire nation in this story increases along with my frustration of Katara. She is a resourceful girl and yet had yet to figure out a way out of her current predicament. It must be painful as hell for her, that the very same soldiers she was giving aid too, just raped innocent people. It's seems like at times she is acquiring a case of Stockholm Syndrome and is making excuses for Zuko's treatment of her and being far to friendly with her fire nation captors just because some of them show her the smallest of kindness. Even the twins aren't good people.
I just want something, ANYTHING bad to start happening to the Soldiers at this point.........and I may have missed something in the previous chapters but if Katara got to Aang and told him what has happened not only to her but many other innocent people......that would be more than enough too puh hm into the avatar State and fuck some people up.
-now on to the next chapter for me-