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Wow I am terrible at keeping promises of reviews. There are a few stories that I promised to review and I slipped up. At this point I wont make any promises but I will 'try' to get a full review, times be hectic here.

in short:

-3 chapter update!?!?!?!?!? It's a christmas miracle.

-Mung, that hypocritical murdering rapist is gonna try to shame the avatar? It frustrates me and terrifies me that the fire folk buy so much into there own hype that they disregard there monstrosity while condemning others for far less offenses.

-What Sokka and Katara need is to just have a good ol fashioned bare knuckle boxing match to suare there shit away. Terrible timing on her part though now since she was seen willingly laying with Zuko by old allies. Aang is the only person who still trusts her.

-So...super chi blocking? Seems a little contrived but if Aang had the use of his bending it would present a problem to the plot if there were still things to be done in the town.

-The ultimate revenge against Mung would be having Lily see him for what he is and hate him, it would crush him. He doesnt deserve a morality pet, he needs a good ol gelding with a spork.

-Aang is starting to become more and more aware of what is going on around him, which could only end in tears.

-Those smugglers don't seem so different from the fire nation soldiers occupying the town.

-I might have missed mention of it previously but is this a common occurrence at all colonies?

-Those spirits need to pull up there big boy/girl pants and get in the game. Agni's slipping like a motherfucker. Only the deity of a group of people like the fire nation would see any good of zuko and katara's union.

-It's a testament to your writing ability that you can make me care so much about certain characters and this fic and fill me with venom for an entire culture lol.

-waits patiently for the next chapter-

Happy Holidays by the way.

:D This is my face while reading this story! I love the fact that Katara doesn't fall in love with Zuko to quick. Plus with over 200~ hapter (bravo might I say) this story is great! Though may I ask some question?
1) When will see the Water Tribe forces again? Really interested to the meeting of Katara and her 'boyfriend' (Who seems like a chill guy ^^)
2) Will Zuko's protectiveness be forever or will it just be a phase with his journey of becoming his own person? (Though I guess you can't really answer that...)
3) When will you update this again? I really new to this site and have no clue on how it works.
4) How the fuck do you seem to know what I want in a Zutara fanfiction? You got the capture, the love, the violence scenes (#noshame) , great wrting style, and a plot that I never want to end.
5) Can I give you a highfive?

Thank you~

Update?

Good story :)

I still dislike Mung, because of the part about how he got "little Lily", but I loved the part about the first Lily.

So Ozai got the letter from Azula about the establishment of Ursa House in this remote Earth kingdom city and will make an appearance? This could be very ugly for Zuko, but also for the refugees. I can see Ozai burning down the House with the occupants inside.
It's so unfair that Zuko get the appreciation and Katara only scorn from the city inhabitants.

I love your story so you have to promise that you'll complete it. I love the way you show various sides of your characters. Nobody not even Iroh or our goody-two shoed Katara. I hope Katara grows up faster. I'm not saying that life has been particularly good to her but i feel there is room for character development. Great fic by the way

Review incoming within the next 24 hours.

-short preview-

-Wow still hate the fire folk

-Mung is trash who has no business even being near a child let along breathing.

-Still sucks to be katara

-OF COURSE the refuges and townsfolk are warming up to zuko, a man not that much better than their abusers and hating on the girl who is in a shit situation and doing her best to help.

Please could you translate this part to normal English for me? I'm not versed enough to understand dialects, sorry. :(

Fan sighed, “Yer cousin always did say you were a little slow, yer Mam is a member of the Kumanishi but she had to earn her mother’s name. Her mother is the youngest daughter; she married the House of Zhuán’s oldest son. She lost status when she took his name and became a member of that damned clan. Your mother grew up with the stigma of the Zhuán name. It didn’t help that her sorry ass Pap was the way he was and everybody knew it. Well and then there’s you. Chir’ren don’t pick the men that make ‘em so they shouldn’t be held accountable for what those men do.”

OMG this was a gory chapter. If this happens to traitors, then why was Iroh unpunished, not that I wished ever to read something like that... anyway if such punishment is 'normal' for Fire Nation, then there is no way that Zuko would ever run and support the Avatar (most wanted enemy of the FN) and even if he would be successful as in the original story, when I don't think he would live long. His people would see him as traitor and usurper.

Thanks for answering the question reagrding Azulas letters. I expected that Ozai would make his appearance as he did on the ship, and this time Zuko would get it for falling for his waterbender pet.

So Qiaolian is not a fragile flower, but a though young lady? I lover the way you give your OC and the minor characters such deep. So Sing Se is searching for new master, which can be really dangerous if Azula will get the wind of this. I'm bit confused though... or maybe I missed something, but did Ozai get the letter from Azula?