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March 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Keep rereading this because how good this is! Though I am wondering when exactly will their tour around the Earth Kingdom will be finished? Since it took several(?) weeks to get there I am guessing it might take a year or so to finish? I absolutely love this ark but wondering if there might be a time skip soon. I guess it's because I want Katara to get pregnant again when she isn't 14. (That came out wrong xD)Nevertheless thank you for writing!
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March 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Qiolian has really been through a lot and I really feel for her. I'm really beginning to feel confused over Katara. While I'm an hopeless romantic I'm beginning to wonder how this will end good for either Zuko or Katara. And how can Katara think Zuko doesn't love her and hates her and when is she finally going to believe that he didn't just rape her because he felt but risked insulting his mother's memory to save her even though it sounds really odd. Then I wonder about that village,that the dead woman was really Aunt Wu wasn't she. Then again what's going with that lady Iroh went to see? When will Iroh catch up with Zuko and when will we see Katara's ex-boyfriend. I really hope that somehow Katara and Zuko will find some way to overcome their differences even though it seems hopeless.
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February 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow what an amazing 3 chapters! I can't wait until the next chapter, I really do hope that Katara can still birth a child. I can't wait until the chapter! This story is worth the wait! I can't wait until you update the next chapter!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!
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February 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Jeez,I hope at some point in the future all the bad karma the Fire nation has racked up will come and bit them in the ass. There ain't no coming back for them. At least Katara now has a female companion who is in a similar situation and thus can relate. And Katara sweetheart, you seem awfully content with a man you claim you will kill one day.
welcome back can't wait for more.
welcome back can't wait for more.
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February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It took me 3 days to finish this whole story! i love how Katara is slowly growing in feelings with Zuko. I hope you do another oral scene with Katara and Zuko! Please Update SOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!
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January 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Update?? Pretty please!!!!
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January 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just want to say this is a very well written story, with a complex story line that I was very surprised to find on this site. So far the story is very good, but the introduction of so many new characters that were not in the original cartoon confuses me sometimes. Past that this is one of my favorite stories I have ever found on Fanfiction.net, or AdultFanfiction.net. Take pride in that, and keep up the good work! Also I want to mention that I am VERY surprised that you have been able to keep writing this story. Most people would have probably abandoned it by now, just for the sheer size of it! Thank you for continuing this story and not abandoning it.
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January 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow!. I waited so long for this chapter. I love the way you spin in new characters. Its refreshing the way tge old characters are given new layers. Keep it up. I can't but express the view that this story isn't getting as much publicity as it deserves. Maybe you should post it on FF.net. I know I've seen worse things over there. Please please you have to update more often I've been here like six times hoping for a update. Anyway your story is nice. Makes the suspense worth it.
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January 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'll admit it, everyday I have been checking to see if this has been updated. This is my favorite fanfic xD when I saw that you replied that to me, I proceed to fan girl like always. Then you said about part 3 which I can't wait to see! Right now hopping for a time skip or/and water tribe reaction to the Gaangs treatment. Especially between Hakoda and Taruk to Katara xD
Also if you need any help, your fans are always here. (Sorry if I'm being pushy) ^^
Also if you need any help, your fans are always here. (Sorry if I'm being pushy) ^^
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December 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love the lore you include in your story, but I really hope the Tatsushin Koh lore is not meaning that you will kill Katara and Zuko in the end.
You now I have the feeling Katara has same horrible luck as Zuko, if the part with Fong and Pipsqueak is any indication. The interaction between the Water tribe sibling went as bad as always and Mung being an ass was not surprising, but the threat to kill people how cares about Aang was frightening at least.
I'm bit confused about the ending though. I presume Aang smells the scent of sex on the solders and Katara, but I mean didn't he witnessed what was done to Sokka on the Ursa? Is he so blind to what happening to Katara or just trying to not see the truth?
Anyway thank you for the lovely holiday gift and hope to read more soon.
You now I have the feeling Katara has same horrible luck as Zuko, if the part with Fong and Pipsqueak is any indication. The interaction between the Water tribe sibling went as bad as always and Mung being an ass was not surprising, but the threat to kill people how cares about Aang was frightening at least.
I'm bit confused about the ending though. I presume Aang smells the scent of sex on the solders and Katara, but I mean didn't he witnessed what was done to Sokka on the Ursa? Is he so blind to what happening to Katara or just trying to not see the truth?
Anyway thank you for the lovely holiday gift and hope to read more soon.