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...so it only made sense to find a woman to fuck that made him happy and respectable woman to bear his children and present to society... that explains Zukos behaviour perfectly. I'm really sorry for Katara and hope Iroh will apologize deeply for creating the man Zuko became. (I'm still speechless about the previous chapter, wondering if this was Zukos idea or just prison matrons normal way of using the female prisoners.)
I hope to read also Hakoda's reaction about this.

What just happen? Did Zuko really allow other men to fuck Katara or was it him self the entire time? What is going to happen to Katara now? Please update soon.

Well now... That sure did take a left turn. Can't wait to see where you go from here with this. However unless it has been Zuko the whole time, which I think it wasn't, please don't have him come back and be all like "You can be with me or be a whore"

WOOOW, dat chapter.

I mean, just wow...that escalated quickly. I'm only confused as to where Zuko was during all this, I hope it'll be answered in the next chapter...I don't even know what to feel for Katara anymore; if she manages to get out of this w/ her sanity intact, that would be miraculous. Never have I been this curious to find out what happens next during this story...keep it up!

Good luck and thank you!

W/ Love,

Mimi

Hey,

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, I just didn't know what to say that I haven't already.

Again, thank you for uploading so much and so frequently and I hope you keep that up.
The story is really starting to interest me, especially the Sokka parts. What he and Haru call Katara is really uncalled for and kind-of depressing...but it's good, really; this is a realistic story, after all, and the portrayal of the characters is very well done.

I can't wait to see what happens next. It's really exciting :)

Thanks again, and good luck!

W/ Love,

Mimi

I have a bad feeling about that last sentence

The chapter was heard-wrenching. Azula is a master of manipulation, giving Katara the means to get rid of Zuko. I wonder if you really killed Haru and his father or if this was a cruel ruse? Katara seems to be hell-bend to die now, so please update soon.

That was an intense chapter. I understand that Zuko is trying to hold up the ruse, but he is breaking Katara even more now. I suppose Sokka will be tortured for information about Haru? He is frustrated and young (same line of thinking as Haru) which exploded in the argument between the siblings, but you really could give him a break.

So Ozai's idea worked if the reaction of Haru is more common.

Nice to come back and see a whole bunch of new chapters :) Now that I'm all caught up, I'm glad to see that Katara is now a bit more willing to be intimate with Zuko. I mean I know she doesn't love him yet or anything but maybe now she won't be getting hurt so much. Even tho her main reason for being compliant is to help her brother and Aang. I hope poor Sokka will be treated better now that they've docked. I don't know why but it really bothered me to hear about his horrible treatment by the crew. I mean becuz he can't bend or anything. He basically defenseless. I'm curious as to what's going thru Mai's mind in all of this as well. I find this story so engaging and I really enjoy reading it. You put a lot of time and effort into this story and it shows, Can't wait to read more :D