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October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good for the first chapter, it was nice that twilight got her first taken so gently, but the story seemed to go a little too fast paced try to give more details of the moment, besides that excellent work!!
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
howdy partner i have an idea for how to put luna in the story ya'll should have her go because she has been on the moon for 1000 years and probably has not gotten layed since then and that she heard about the place from somepony anyway i thought i would share my idea anyway keep up the good work sugarcube
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September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lol the title says it all in chapter three. I didn't expect rainbow dash there.
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September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great work on another amazing chapter sugarcube do ya'll think you can pair applejack and rarity together also the southern talk needs a mite more work partner anyways keep up the good work sugarcube
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September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent Story. No huge grammer or spelling mistakes. I look forward to your next update.
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September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great work on another chapter partner ah'm glad to hear big mac is gonna join in do ya'll think ya could use fluttershy and photo finish together anyway keep up the good work sugar cube
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September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Big Macintosh? ! Wow this is going to be awkward!
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September 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to continue this?
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September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it's great
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September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great work partner ah really liked the story do ya'll think you can have big mac go to the brothel and maby some mare on mare action anyway ya'll keep up the good work sugarcube