rate_review Reviews

This story is fantastic, well written, devoid of spelling and grammatical error. Without spoiling I now consider the final two chapters of this story canon, it is a back story worthy of publication by Hasbro.

A definite must

that was/is a great head cannon about the origins of nightmare night and it does fits into the show aspect. as for the rest of the story so far it is really good to fit into the story of the story of mlp so far perfectly as well hopefully you will continue it I am curious about Hunter and twilight life as well as there parents. are twilight parents ones who want to keep there gens pure as well or will they be ok with it. as for hunters dad well I will first like to see what the female Pegasus will say or will Hunter already have asked twilight to marry him

Wow, so many feels, i hope to see more of your work, the only thing i can hit on are the repetitive spelling errors but i really enjoyed reading, keep up the good work.

soo im wonerin if you will put the "twilight the alpony" in there?

I really can't think of anything to say about how great this story is. Luna's back-story was amazing, I hope you continue this story.

Wow..The last bit about Luna was just amazing. It was a wonderful story and would be a good fic on its own though I'm sure you have reasons for putting it in this.

great work partner ah really liked lunas back story more than how it happend in the show great sex scenes too cant wait for the next chapter keep up the great work sugarcube

great work partner the sex scenes were amazing and the story keeps gettin better and ya'll are really getting the hang of the southern talk looking forward to reading the next chapter keep up the great work sugarcube

I could go for some hardcore....turning a mare into my personal toilet...wait did I write that down, err I meant to say that can't wait for the next chapter and I hope Big mac gets a nice hoof up his ass

great work partner on another touching chapter sugarcube your southern talk has also improved still needs just a mite more work also there were some small spelling errors anyway keep up the great work sugarcube