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September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME story you are VERY VERY creative, i am looking forward to reading more chapters of it
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September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love the fic man, just love it, cant wait for more like with sierra's freind. and i deffinatlt want some more fooling around with june and sierra. keep up the ggod work. you should check out the jack/miko fic i wrote sometime :)
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September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank YOU! I have been waiting for some TFP Het and its Nice to see you started with JackxMiko (My OTP) I honestly hope to read much more of this soon
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September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey dude! :)
Glad to see the original story back online (I had to change my username too, it wasn't accepting my old one (Guardian of Azarath, the one I use on FF.net), so I went with TheLoneOne. (like on sofurry), now that you're free to continue this fic without harrassment or danger of deletion, it'll be interesting to see where it goes (I'm still going to work on and post the rewrite to Sofurry if that's ok with you, It's actually proving very popular, it's already got 5 5/5 ratings for the first two chapters alone :D).
As soon as i figure out how, i'll subscribe to your stories :)
Keep up the good work.
Glad to see the original story back online (I had to change my username too, it wasn't accepting my old one (Guardian of Azarath, the one I use on FF.net), so I went with TheLoneOne. (like on sofurry), now that you're free to continue this fic without harrassment or danger of deletion, it'll be interesting to see where it goes (I'm still going to work on and post the rewrite to Sofurry if that's ok with you, It's actually proving very popular, it's already got 5 5/5 ratings for the first two chapters alone :D).
As soon as i figure out how, i'll subscribe to your stories :)
Keep up the good work.
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September 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very entertaining so far, my favorite chapters have been ch.s 3 and 4 with June and Arcee.
I think you've gotten a pretty good balance between the emotional romance stuff & the lemons.
Really like Arcee's human form.
As for suggestions, hmmm, the only thing I really want to see at the moment is a threesome between Jack, June, and Arcee.
Really suck's you got taken down from fanfiction, I'm still very disappointed with them over the whole lemon witch hunt thing.
Excellent work, keep it up!
I think you've gotten a pretty good balance between the emotional romance stuff & the lemons.
Really like Arcee's human form.
As for suggestions, hmmm, the only thing I really want to see at the moment is a threesome between Jack, June, and Arcee.
Really suck's you got taken down from fanfiction, I'm still very disappointed with them over the whole lemon witch hunt thing.
Excellent work, keep it up!
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September 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Could you add Akiba Prime to the harem?
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September 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I rather like this story so far, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.