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It sucks that you were taken off FF and that you haven't updated any of your stories, they're really good!
I really hope you update again soon, and add a chapter where arcee june and jack all get into a super kinky threesome.

This chapter was great... I love it... You should have Carly show up and be like I know the Transformers of a different Universe.. You also should have Alexis show up she could be come home to American and bump into the transformers...

I love it so far, Auumaan. I hope you can update this story one day. I would hate to see it go to waste thanks to some asshead on FanFic who reported you for no reason!

Just found about this story, not bad so far, you should really add onto this!
I can't really come up with anything for suggestions... I really just want to see alot more of June, and can't wait for when her and Arcee get in a threesome with Jack.

Glad to see you are back up & running. I know it's difficult righting on a site where there are not too many visitors. But you can easily go back to FanFic & tell everybody on ur old profile where your new home is. I hope you update soon or sometime in the future. Keep up the good work Auumaan!!

Got me an account going on AFF. Again, keep up the good work dude.

I dunno about adding versions of Sari and Lori, it may make things a little convoluted. I would say just stick to Prime characters, that way you could keep focus on what you've got and even make the sex scenes more heated and raunchy. As for what the story is now, I think you have a great thing going, you should keep up with the deep and tender loving moments of the story, and it wouldn't hurt to maybe go into more detail of the love scenes. A personal wish is that you add alot more June and Arcee moments in the future, hell you could make the whole story focus on those two and Jack only and I'd be perfectly okay with that.

Any keep up the good work and update real soon plz!

Please make more of this as it has to be the best Transformers Prime Fic I've read.

You do find a good balance between tenderness and smut that's for sure, you could probably go further too and things would be fine. Not bad hope there is a update soon, and can't wait for the chapter when June "teams" up with arcee.

I love the first chapter it was great. Here is a name for Sierra's friend Natalie.