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for Ben's Girls

by Jehuty-Prime

person lycan
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't where he can buy them, but every episode of ben 10 orignal, alien force, and ultimate alien are on ben10watch.com. they stream for free, they might download for free too.
person Belfry
schedule September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have read your story and I must say it is very good! You have captured the best parts of all the characters, although I personally prefer the original series--I loved it when you put young Gwen in!

I can't find your email address anywhere!. I would like to propose a crossover arc (my chapters are usually short sized) or chapter, with my story, "Crossed Lines" and yours, with each of us telling the story from our own character's point of view. Please delete this after you have read it.

Thank you.
person lycan
schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More Aunt Lily, that's all I'm asking.
schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just sat down and read this story, took me a couple nights but I finished it lol. Really hope you finish it cause ending it here would just be evil.
schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey man guess your borrowed time is up oh well sorry i wasn't able to keep up with your stories while they were up on fanficiondotnet i love this chapter its always my Favorite keep up the good work.
person lycan
schedule September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Personally, since you were reposting it, i think that you shuld have this chapter, and the chapter were he bangs Carlie and her Freinds be fore the chapter, "Return of Evil"
person lycan
schedule August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AT LAST!!! I'm one of your loyal readers who read this on fanfiction.net, lycan13. i'm glad you finally reposted this, it'll makr it easier to cycle through chapters (That's a bicth on word". i hope you get the rest of the chapters, plus chapter 34 up soon. P.S. throwing Emily in there was unexpected but pleasent twist ;).