rate_review Reviews

This was a great story, I really enjoyed it. I really hope you write a sequel!!

I was so not expecting it to be Jasmine! I genuinley would be very interested in read more of this in future if you decide to write more.

Well, you've certainly `painted` quite the picture regarding all the characters you've used so far... And I just went back and put in the _`_ points, laughing my ass off, considering How animation was first done Way Back When. As much painted as drawn, original cells from such movies were indeed works of art, and even in the last years of the 20th century select cells could fetch 5 or 6 figure prices at auction! Now, as for your story... It was a firm vision you provided, but just what are the images You make use of when writing? Ariel and Jasmine... Belle... Snow White (being a particular breed of bitch), I can see, and remember. Saw "Little Mermaid", "Aladdin", and "Beauty and the Beast" in a movie-house when they aired..... which was HOW long ago??? Some of the `Aladdin` T.V. series, again from Many years ago, but nothing from anything that had went StV. "Gods, how I howled at some of the jokes and puns in "Lilo & Stitch" (Stitch wiping out 'San Fran' ala Godzilla just cracked me up), hell there were 4 trailers for it, and I think the `Aladdin` one was the funniest. You mentioned `Jane's bachelorette party`, you mean from Tarzan? Ooohhh, who Else was there again??? `Dierdre` is Sleeping Beauty's granddaughter? And just who is `Damien`? So it Is an image, just your image, or a link to any images that might help a reader to keep pace with what you envision. I could see this going two more chapters (can we say Trilogy? HAHAHAHAA); the second showing some Other of the ladies mentioned yet not shown, such as Mulan, and the third as a wrap-up. Ariel is having a birthday soon? Let Eric and Jasmine come clean and be honest to Ariel... and loving. Let them all be happy together.

This story is fantastic. I really enjoyed how it serves as a commentary on Hollywood culture while remaining an erotic fanfic. The characters are all so well-written, and every scene is absolutely vivid. I also love all the individual twists, like Snow White running the brothel - I seriously expected one of the villainesses (like Malificent); to say nothing of that last scene...

Nice. I'd really like to see a sequel to this, maybe focusing on a post-divorce Ariel ending up at the Wicked Witches Castle? That could be cool.

I thought this was great! The writing was well-done and the concept seems very original. I do hope you add to it! I'd love to see the other princesses, like Pocahontas and Kida.

This was a fun read. I've seen the 'animated characters as actors' angle before, but this take on it felt fresh and new. Can't wait to see what else you have in store.

This story is rather good, I'm looking forward to seeing where things end up going.

more f/f less men pls

I enjoyed it seems like you have a few beehives stirred up so far would be cool to see what the fallouts gonna be. Really like the transitions of the characters into the snobbish life styles and really like he Melody and LILO thing. Though I did see the ending coming still enjoyed the ride