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for Crossed Lines

by Belfry

person hot shot
schedule February 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow johny us really in a vine and now sissy is making plans what other dripping to come keep them coming
person hot shot
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow asome chapter wonder what lila's fantasy is and what will happend then the circumstances come to that point hope to see more
person hot shot
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow the girls are exsated about johny now they will begin to test whats wrong with him and there mother worry about johny wow can't wait to.see what happeds. Next keep them coming
person hot shot
schedule January 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The price for condoms wow poor johny what other miss hap will befall on him keep them coming
person hot shot
schedule January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor johny the stuff he has to to get a condom well hopefully he takes his time to get home and dose not cross pads with Sissi or else he's going to have big problems keep them coming.
person Darkon
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What gets me is that the twins automatically assume that JOHNNY is the one with the fertility problem. Granted, they perform all manner of bizarro experiments on him, but they've done a fair number on each other if memory serves. Wouldn't that be something if they discover they're both totally barren, or worse, mutated?
person hot shot
schedule January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter especially the part that show that there's was something wrong with johny and now Sussy knows what happend to her memories. Hope to see more of your updates soon keep up the great work
person vic_elor
schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you sure have come a long way from my noble beginnings!
person hot shot
schedule December 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the two updates you posted love it plus i want to trow in the idea that Mary and susan's experiments did something to johny that would not let them get pregnant and have to find a way to fix this mess they both made but that's just an idea also they should sound prof johny's room for there special time hope to see more updates soon keep them coming
person Darkon
schedule November 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay, disregard any suggestion I made about throwing in a titfuck in a later chapter. Had I known the...mechanics of the act were beyond Susan and Mary's "capabilities" beforehand, I would've kept my mouth shut, heh.