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April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow poor johnny can't wait and see what will happened next keep them coming
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April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I should've known you'd be the first person to FINALLY write something relating to that crazy Rule 63-themed episode, and it didn't come a moment too soon. That whole episode has fanfic potential written all over it (among other things), yet until now nobody has even bothered with it. I'm looking forward to how you'll portray the action between Johnny/the twins and their alternate dimension counterparts.
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April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Asome fic livo the update can't wait and see what's next
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April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow didn't see that coming hope to see what happends next
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March 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I had to stop for a second on this chapter and rub my eyes... Not because I was crying but because I wanted to make sure I wasn't seeing things.
What made you change your mind on the ending of chapter "forgiveness?"
What made you change your mind on the ending of chapter "forgiveness?"
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March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow love the drama the tragedy with johny and Mary. Can't wait to see what happends next with johny
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March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading the story up through "all hell will break loose." You really took the blank spot I had left in my story (between the ending and the post-script) and really went to town with it! I really enjoyed reading it, especially since you did such a good job filling out all the characters. Having all the side segments involving the parents gave the story a greater sense of realism and showing the parents secret fantasies adds a unique family layer onto the story of sibling love.
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February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update love the drama and everything that is happening keep them coming
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow love the drama you put in this chapter and you also reveal Lila's fantasy as well. It's asome that you finally show as to why they spend so much time away from home just by themselfs can't wait to see what happends next keep them coming
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February 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow asome update now the battles are going to hard on johny because every one wants a piece of johny can't wait to see what happends next