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Wow dint see that coming that was a total shoker toy put there love how it came out especially when Mary added all the dots and figure who jonny's twin was can't wait to see what you come up with keep them coming

I agree with Christiopher, your little revelation that Johnny and Sissy are brother and sister was a total bombshell. Sure, they look a lot alike, and they both have that devil-may-care attitude, but it never once dawned on me that they might be related. To use a line from the show, I didn't see that one coming, heh.

Okay... awesome latest chapter to the story. After reading "Test Family Secrets Part 2", I actually went...... BONG! Jaw hit the ground!
I was not expecting the 'adoptive twist' to the story in the slightest nor that Sissy, who Johnny has boned, is his sister.

Oh man.... Johnny is going to have to give his parents a wakeup call in the next chapter and I'm waiting with baited breath to see how they are going to get out of THIS mess.

I like the way you added the surprise about Johnny & Sissy being twins. Please update soon.

I get the distinct impression that you've slowed down on updating your story because you feel it's no longer getting six tons of reviews every chapter. If that's correct, then I feel that it's necessary to tell you that a slower review flow at this stage could be a flattering thing. I like to think when a story's 60+ chapters along and it isn't getting reviews out the wazoo like it used to, it means that your readers think your work is effectively flawless. I certainly don't think your story needs any improvement, and that's why I haven't given you any real input for months. And yes, I have been faithfully waiting for EVERY NEW CHAPTER.

Your story's far too good to let up on it now. You can't be dissuaded just because you think nobody is paying it any attention, especially when your hits counter says otherwise.

Wow talk about a bomb what will Mari do and what other secrets will come out hope to see more soon keep them coming

Wow asome chapter love the part were Lila and husband are tring to figure out what to do and what kind of secret do they have hope to see more keep it up

Wow well jonny help her feel much better but still what will Lila and her husban do now that they realize it was no dream well keep them coming can't wait to see what happened next

great story so far please do not let it become a dead story.

I like the way you had Johnny ask for Gil not to be executed. Please update soon.