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for Crossed Lines

by Belfry

person Anon
schedule August 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like who you chose to teach Jillian. And have her pregnant.
person hot shot
schedule August 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow didn't see that coming especially the ending part of the chapter hope to see more soon keep it up
person hot shot
schedule August 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow didn't see that coming wonder what else can happend next keep them coming
person hot shot
schedule July 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow poor dog next time he may ha e to come up with a better plan asome update hope to see more soon
person hot shot
schedule July 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow didn't see that coming love this chapter hope to see more soon keep them coming
person hot shot
schedule July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow asome chapter love the small plot hope to see more soon
person vic_elor
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Phoenix Wright... lol
person hot shot
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Asome update love the reason you gave keep them coming
person hot shot
schedule June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love the set up you have for this chapter a small brake but well worth it keep them coming hope to see more soon
person hot shot
schedule June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow now that this is happening wonder what will happend next keep them coming love drama do far