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for Crossed Lines

by Belfry

schedule January 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
could you add a flash back to the Lila Hugh and Jonny threesome. It sounds hot
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you added Doctor Who to the story. As being one of Susan and mary's teachers. Please update soon.
person Robert Byrd
schedule January 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you told what everyone was feeling and thinking. Please update soon.
person hot shot
schedule January 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Asome chapters been a wile but love the last update will see what you come up with in the future keep them coming love how you made this fic keep it up
person hot shot
schedule December 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow talk about what you can see well there's that now what will his mother do next keep them coming
person hot shot
schedule December 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow jonny got caught by Susan and now wonder who us going to be next keep them coming
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Susan is a complete Bitch Sissy doesnt belong to her Johnny's the only one who Sissy should be with
person Darkon
schedule December 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Remind me again how Johnny was able to eat out Jillian's ENTIRE REPRODUCTIVE SYSTEM. That's what I call a pretty nifty trick, haha.
person hot shot
schedule December 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow so much to worry about and so much planing and then john,s mothet and who will be the father of the baby can't wait to find out
person hot shot
schedule December 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow johnnys mom is really getting more and more frustrated wonder when it will the stress get to her and will Jillian tell johnny the truth love it keep it up