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Asome chapter love how he's been black mail but let's face it she's not that dum she knows that johnny would go to her sister for help so she might have s back up plan for that ocassion so johnny might not be out of the woods yet love it since the going at it together they should sound prof the room just in case right well hope to see what you have for us soon keep up the good work

Holy monkey cookies Johnny's situation as gotten... Bad? Let see one girl loves him, one is falling into insanity over him, and another wants him as a toy, I don't know whether to laugh at how screwed he is or curse him out for being so lucky? Truly a quandary; oh well let see where you go from here. This story is great and major improvement in all areas here from first chap. Chow Bennet out

Asome chapter and wow didn't see that coming now johnny has a big isue with sisi will he give in. To her demands and what kind of demans she will make hope to see now soon

Sissy now has Johnny by the figurative short hairs, though that will probably become a more literal arrangement very soon. I wonder if he will keep this predicament from his sisters, though that would be a disaster either way. If he spills the beans about being blackmailed, he'll have to do everything in his power to keep the twins from killing Sissy. If he decides to keep this a secret, then he should prepare to spin a line of bullshit for the ages because even if the twins never discover the blackmail, there's no doubt in my mind they WILL at least find out he's been seeing another girl behind their backs. When that happens, Johnny will be the one who gets flayed alive (at least by Susan).

I agree with one of the reviews that seems to have disappeared. Johnny will be playing with fire if this...meeting with Sissy turns into something more serious. The twins strike me as the REALLY possessive/jealous types. I can only imagine what they'll do if Sissy gets into the picture. Deus only knows they can barely tolerate having to share Johnny with each other. That goes double for Susan. She'll probably weave some kind of plot that gets somebody killed, haha.

Another great chapter. It had the perfect balance of plot AND poon, exactly what I look for in these kinds of stories! I can sympathize with Johnny's crappy math skills, though he at least has the excuse of being thirteen, heh.

My one complaint with this chapter is that I feel you had Susan knocked up a little too early. I knew it was going to happen eventually, but I also figured that she was perfectly content at this stage to attempt to win over Johnny solely through increasingly kinkier sex. I was half-right about it in the end, but all the same I would've preferred if you held it off at least until Susan caught wind of Mary's own plan. On the bright side, this will make the story much more interesting, MUCH MORE QUICKLY. Johnny's gonna have a stroke when he finds out about this, though I suspect that will be nothing compared to what his parents will do, assuming they find out of course!

Beyond that one little flaw, the chapter was otherwise fantastic. As I said in the beginning, you've struck a perfect balance of relevant plot and sexy time, and that's not necessarily easy to do. Most stories I read these days are either PWP's or what I call "plots without porn", haha. It's good to read something that hits the middle ground. More importantly, I feel that you have captured the personalities of the twins (Mary as the honest empath, Susan as the obsessive antisocial) and the others perfectly; the TV show itself couldn't have done a better job in that department. Keep that up above all else!

Johnny handled Mary's confession quite well, though somehow I don't think he'll be nearly as gracious when he finds out he unknowingly knocked her up, haha.

Seriously though, Mary's really playing a dangerous game here. I knew full well that she was a few cans short of a six-pack when I read Vic's story, but at the time I figured even she would've realized getting impregnated by her own brother would be a no-no. The fact that she appears to have every intention to carry it to term tells me she's even more warped than I thought.

How chapter 9 is going to unfold is anybody's guess, but it wouldn't surprise me if Susan decided to follow the same course. I can't even imagine how difficult things would become after that, not to mention awkward.

I will never be able to watch Johnny Test again...without thinking perverted thoughts. This was great! Thanks for giving me new reason to watch that show again!