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Asome fic live the triangle that's happening looks like johnny needs a brake but I douth that yes going to get one keep up the great work

I've noticed that you've been fixated on Mary's chest for the past few chapters. Do I foresee a possible titfuck in a future chapter? That would be swell. Fanfic authors seem loathe to write about that kind of sex act these days, and I haven't read a story with a decent titfuck in it for years.

Beyond that, I really don't have anything else to say that would be of any help to you, and that includes recommendations. The story, as you have envisioned it, needs no improvement as far as I'm concerned. I like where you're going with the plot, the action is hot, AND you've somehow kept all the characters IC through it all. It's pretty obvious you're holding out for reviews, but I think that's a waste of time since I feel that reviews are a way to express criticism; your story has nothing to criticize. That's why I haven't been dropping in with any regular input. I haven't reviewed simply because you don't NEED my review. What you've got so far is THAT good.

I said it before, and I'll say it again: if you keep writing, I'll keep reading!

Wow asome fic love the part were there mother notice the change in them but would have like for Sissy to have made a back up plan hut hey maybe kissing johny will trigger all her memories to cone back its up to you keep them coming hope to see more soon

Plz let Sissy get her memory back n Susan & Mary lose theirs

Regarding your fic, I'm glad that you have finally ended that weird anime arc. Truth be told, I didn't much care for it. While it was VERY well-written, I feel that it was more of a distraction from the main plot than anything else. It did give me an idea, however. Maybe the twins could somehow technologically adapt the magic that Panty used to age Johnny and use it on themselves to seduce him. I'd pay money to read about that!

Wow didn't see that coming loving the twist and curb you throw at us keep them coming limited and more

Asome fic can't believe that johnny love his mother that far but now what will happen now that mentality gas been awaken in him live the drama keep them coming love to see more

Im really sad that Johnny doesnt have Sissy

Sorry about my disappearance over the past week. My fall coursework has begun and I've been buried in readings. I've cleared out most of the initial material so I should be reviewing semi-regularly from here on out. Now if only the idiots who consider themselves IT for this site would get their act together and get the login system WORKING again, then I'd be back in business!

You handled the "Sissy Arc" really well. I figured that Johnny would eventually give in and give it to her all hard and sloppy, but the fact that he actually followed through with wiping her memory caught me by complete surprise. It really demonstrated the devotion (and fear!) he has for his sisters. On that subject, I'm not at all surprised that Mary is MUCH more accepting of Johnny's "activities" than psycho Susan could ever hope to be. I'd make some cliched claim about how their love is true-blue and can overcome any obstacle and all that, but that's pretty self-evident by this point, heh.

As I said a few weeks ago, keep running with this. I may not be reviewing every chapter as I did at one point, but I'm still keeping an eye on your work like nobody's business!

Asome fic johnny has learn the hard way that something's don't have an easy fix now he has to live with the knowledge that sussi loves him but he had to so it for Mary now will see what problems his actions carry keep up the asome work